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八、(2025·扬州市江都区邵樊片期中)书面表达。(共10分)
随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是"Changes around us"。请你根据下图中的提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。
go abroad, travel

online ...
Travel
Studies
do more reading, do
more group work ...
Changes
around us
drive cars, take high-
speed trains ...
Traffic
The environment
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Changes around us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.





答案:One possible version:
Changes around us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
As for travel, many people enjoy travelling in their spare time. Some people like travelling online and more and more people can afford to travel abroad. Our studies are also changing. For example, more and more students show an interest in reading. More group work and discussions are done in class, which can help us learn more. More and more people have their own cars. At the same time, more and more people prefer to walk to school instead of driving. And high-speed trains make travel faster and easier. The environment changes a lot too. The air is fresher and the water is cleaner. We often take a walk happily in the park.
In a word, our life is becoming better and better. We look forward to a better future.
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到题目先明确核心主题是"Changes around us",第一步先梳理所有要求:需要覆盖Travel、Studies、Traffic、The environment四个模块的全部提示要点,语法正确上下文连贯,词数100左右,不能出现真实个人信息。接下来搭建写作思路:采用总分总结构,承接题目给出的开头之后,依次按四个模块展开内容:先写旅行方面的变化,把提示的线上旅行、出国旅行的内容自然融入;接着写学习上的变化,对应多阅读、多小组合作的提示点;之后写交通的变化,把私家车普及、高铁出行的内容写清楚;再补充环境部分的正向变化做合理发挥,最后收尾总结生活越来越美好,完成全文。写作过程中注意描述已经发生的变化多用现在完成时,保证时态准确,不要遗漏要点。
【解析】
1. 搭建行文框架:采用总分总结构,题目已给出开篇句,主体部分分四个对应模块展开,最后用1-2句话总结升华主题。
2. 逐一填充对应要点:
① Travel部分:点明当下很多人空闲时间热衷旅行,既可以选择线上云旅行,也有越来越多家庭有能力负担出国旅行的开销;
② Studies部分:说明学习模式的变化,学生们更愿意多阅读拓展视野,课堂上安排了更多小组合作任务,帮助大家共同进步;
③ Traffic部分:说明交通的进步,很多家庭拥有私家车,同时高铁线路普及,让跨区域出行变得更快捷便利;
④ The environment部分:合理补充正向细节,比如空气更清新、水体更洁净,周边公园变多方便大家休闲散步。
3. 用合适的连接词把各部分内容衔接起来,通读全文检查语法错误,控制总词数符合要求,规避真实姓名、校名等敏感信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Changes around us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
As for travel, many people enjoy travelling in their spare time. Some people like travelling online and more and more people can afford to travel abroad. Our studies are also changing. For example, more and more students show an interest in reading. More group work and discussions are done in class, which can help us learn more. More and more people have their own cars. At the same time, more and more people prefer to walk to school instead of driving. And high-speed trains make travel faster and easier. The environment changes a lot too. The air is fresher and the water is cleaner. We often take a walk happily in the park.
In a word, our life is becoming better and better. We look forward to a better future.
【知识点】
话题英语写作,现在完成时运用,要点整合表达
【点评】
本题属于提示类半开放书面表达,给出的四个维度要点清晰明确,学生不容易跑题,既考察学生对给定提示信息的完整整合能力,也要求学生结合生活常识对环境部分做合理发挥,同时考察基础的语句衔接和时态运用能力,符合初中期中测试的写作考察要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
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