八、书面表达。（共 10 分）
博学于文，约之以礼。今天，“讲文明，知礼仪”是每个人耳熟能详的标语。为此，阳光中学将开展文明礼貌月活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇以“Better manners, better life”为题的文章。
要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；2. 词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Better manners, better life
Good manners are good ways of treating people so that people feel better about themselves and about each other. A person with good manners behaves politely.
As teenagers, what should we do for better manners?
Above all, when in public places, it's polite of us to keep our voice down.
We should be patient enough to queue till it is our turn.
What's more, it's important for us to have good table manners.
When we are sitting at the table, we should not start until everyone is ready.
It's polite to wait for everyone to finish before we leave the table.
At school, we must obey all the school rules to make our school more civilized.
As the saying goes, “Manners make the man.” I hope everyone can have good manners and try to be a better man.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心主题是倡导文明礼仪，需要覆盖三个指定场景的礼仪要点：公共场合礼仪、餐桌礼仪、校园礼仪。第一步先衔接题目已经给出的开头内容，自然过渡到“我们该如何践行文明礼仪”的话题；第二步用合适的逻辑连接词，分别对三个场景的具体文明行为进行举例说明，内容贴合学生日常实际，避免空泛表述；第三步控制总词数在90左右，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾，检查有没有遗漏要点、有没有出现真实校名姓名，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 过渡衔接：承接开头对文明礼仪的定义，点明青少年身份，用"As teenagers, what should we do for better manners?"自然引出下文的行为说明。
2. 公共礼仪部分：用过渡词Above all引出公共场合的文明行为，列举“公共场合压低音量、自觉排队等候”两个具体的合规行为，符合日常公共礼仪要求。
3. 餐桌礼仪部分：用过渡词What's more引出餐桌礼仪的内容，列举“等所有人准备好再开动、所有人用餐结束后再离席”两个符合餐桌礼仪的行为，内容贴合生活实际。
4. 校园礼仪部分：补充说明在校要遵守校规，共建文明校园，覆盖最后一个指定要点。
5. 最后直接衔接题目给出的结尾句，整体检查词数、语句通顺度，确认所有要点都覆盖，没有违规信息即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Better manners, better life
Good manners are good ways of treating people so that people feel better about themselves and about each other. A person with good manners behaves politely.
As teenagers, what should we do for better manners? Above all, when in public places, it's polite of us to keep our voice down. We should be patient enough to queue till it is our turn.
What's more, it's important for us to have good table manners. When we are sitting at the table, we should not start until everyone is ready. It's polite to wait for everyone to finish before we leave the table. At school, we must obey all the school rules to make our school more civilized.
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." I hope everyone can have good manners and try to be a better man.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；文明礼仪话题；过渡词运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目要求，完整覆盖公共礼仪、餐桌礼仪、校园礼仪三个全部指定要点，使用了above all、what's more等过渡词让行文逻辑清晰，运用it作形式主语的常用句型丰富句式，内容贴合学生日常学习生活，词数符合要求，语句通顺连贯，没有冗余内容，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
