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八、书面表达。(共 10 分)
你们学校倡导“环保生活,从我做起”,计划成立学校志愿服务队,招募学生环保志愿者。假如你是李华,请用英语给服务队的负责人写一封电子邮件,申请成为其中一员。
内容包括:
1. What do you think of going green?
2. What action do you usually take to go green?
3. What will you do to spread(传播) the idea of going green if you are in the team?
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Dear Chairperson,
Thank you for reading my letter. I would like to








I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案:One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
Thank you for reading my letter. I would like to join the school voluntary team to help protect our environment. In my opinion, going green plays a very important role in our life.
In my daily life, I often try my best to reduce pollution. For example, I always remember to take my own bags when shopping instead of plastic bags. As we all know, it may take a plastic bag hundreds of years to break down. What's more, I know the importance of saving energy, so I always turn off the tap when brushing my teeth and turn off the lights when I leave a room. I also plant flowers at home to live a green life.
If I am lucky enough to join the team, I will help hand out leaflets, teach young children ways to recycle things and take part in all kinds of activities.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道题,第一步先明确写作身份是申请环保志愿者的李华,文体是申请邮件,核心要覆盖题干给出的三个明确要点。首先开篇先直接点明写信目的:申请加入学校的环保志愿服务队,紧接着回应第一个要点,清晰表达自己对践行绿色生活的看法,点明环保的重要意义。接下来对应第二个要点,结合中学生的日常场景,列举自己平时践行绿色生活的具体真实行动,比如自带购物袋、随手节水节电等,证明自己本身就具备良好的环保习惯,增强申请的说服力。最后对应第三个要点,说明如果成功入选志愿队后,自己计划通过哪些行动传播环保理念,内容要贴合校园志愿活动的场景,不要脱离实际。最后注意控制词数在100左右,不要出现真实个人信息,用衔接词让行文流畅自然即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分:承接给定开头,直接说明写信的核心诉求是加入学校环保志愿队,同时清晰表述自己对绿色生活的认知,点明践行环保对我们的生活和地球生态都有十分重要的意义,完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 主体第一部分:围绕“日常践行环保的行动”展开,列举2-3个符合中学生生活的具体环保行为,比如购物自带布袋减少塑料袋使用、日常随手关闭水龙头和电灯节约能源、在家种植绿植等,用for example, what's more这类衔接词串联内容,让逻辑更顺畅,完成第二个要点的表述。
3. 主体第二部分:围绕“入队后传播环保理念的计划”展开,写出自己会通过发放环保传单、给低年级同学科普回收小技巧、参与各类环保主题活动等方式推广绿色理念,完成第三个要点的表述。
4. 最后衔接题干给出的结尾句,通读全文检查要点是否全部覆盖、词数是否符合要求,修正语法错误即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
Thank you for reading my letter. I would like to join the school voluntary team to help protect our environment. In my opinion, going green plays a very important role in our life.
In my daily life, I often try my best to reduce pollution. For example, I always remember to take my own bags when shopping instead of plastic bags. As we all know, it may take a plastic bag hundreds of years to break down. What's more, I know the importance of saving energy, so I always turn off the tap when brushing my teeth and turn off the lights when I leave a room. I also plant flowers at home to live a green life.
If I am lucky enough to join the team, I will help hand out leaflets, teach young children ways to recycle things and take part in all kinds of activities.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文申请信写作;环保主题表达;书面表达谋篇
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生校园生活的应用类书面表达,题干给出了非常明确的三个写作要点,不容易出现跑题问题,学生可以结合自身的日常环保经历填充细节,写作时注意将三个要点完整覆盖,使用合适的衔接词串联内容,避免基础语法错误,就可以拿到合格分数,适当补充合理的细节还能进一步提升作文的得分档次。
【难度系数】
0.7
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