八、(2025·扬州市仪征市期末)书面表达。(共10分)
社会在不断地发展进步,成绩不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。你校英语社团正开展"We act，we improve"的主题讨论活动,请你写一篇短文,谈谈除了学习课本知识之外,我们还应该做些什么。提示如下：
要求：
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
With the development of society，learning well is not the only thing we students should do. To be good middle school students，I think we have a lot of things to do.
答案：One possible version: With the development of society, learning well is not the only thing we students should do. To be good middle school students, I think we have a lot of things to do. First, manners make the man. We should learn to behave politely. When we queue, we shouldn't push in before others. It's impolite to make much noise while eating or drinking. Second, it's our duty to understand the importance of protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. It's wise for us to go to school on foot or by bicycle. Third, we should care about the people in need. It's wonderful for us to work as volunteers. Moreover, it's kind of us to donate money to some charities. The more we act, the more we will improve ourselves.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确核心要求：主题是"We act, we improve"，必须覆盖三个核心板块，每个板块都要列举2个对应示例，词数控制在100左右，给定开头无需重写。解题可以按清晰步骤推进：1. 先搭建行文框架，用First/Second/Third这类逻辑连接词把三个板块明确区分，让文章结构一目了然；2. 第一个板块对应文明礼仪主题，挑选学生熟悉的日常礼貌行为作为两个示例，比如排队不插队、就餐时不大声喧哗；3. 第二个板块对应环保主题，选贴合学生生活的两个环保行为，比如不乱扔垃圾、步行/骑车上学践行绿色出行；4. 第三个板块对应关爱弱势群体主题，选两个常见善举作为示例，比如参与志愿活动、为慈善机构捐款；5. 最后加收尾句呼应主题，点明行动越多自我提升越大，通读全文检查语法错误，确认所有提示信息无遗漏，词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，首先引出第一个要点文明礼仪：先点明礼貌的重要性，随后给出两个符合要求的示例：排队时不插队，吃喝的时候不制造大噪音，贴合日常礼仪场景。
2. 用Second过渡引出第二个要点环境保护：点明保护环境是我们的责任，随后给出两个示例：不随意乱扔垃圾，选择步行或者骑自行车上学践行低碳出行。
3. 用Third过渡引出第三个要点关爱有需要的人：点明我们要主动帮助他人，随后给出两个示例：参与志愿工作，向慈善机构捐款。
4. 最后用总结句收尾，呼应"We act, we improve"的主题，说明付出的行动越多，自我提升就越大，完成全文。全文逻辑连贯，所有提示信息全部覆盖，语法准确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version: With the development of society, learning well is not the only thing we students should do. To be good middle school students, I think we have a lot of things to do. First, manners make the man. We should learn to behave politely. When we queue, we shouldn't push in before others. It's impolite to make much noise while eating or drinking. Second, it's our duty to understand the importance of protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. It's wise for us to go to school on foot or by bicycle. Third, we should care about the people in need. It's wonderful for us to work as volunteers. Moreover, it's kind of us to donate money to some charities. The more we act, the more we will improve ourselves.
【知识点】
英语书面写作，情景话题作文，连接词运用
【点评】
本题是初中常考的观点类话题作文，所有核心要点都已经明确给出，学生只需要按要求补充对应示例，用合适的连接词串联内容，保证语句通顺、语法正确就能拿到不错的分数。写作时要注意不要遗漏每个板块要求的2个示例，最后收尾点题可以让文章更完整，更容易获得高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
