Ⅶ. 书面表达(25 分)
为弘扬传统文化,校英文报发起以“A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us”为题的征文。请选取一种身边的中国传统手工艺品,根据以下思维导图的内容提示,写一篇主题征文进行投稿。
要求:1. 文章不得出现真实姓名和校名;2. 短文必须包括上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 词数 80 左右。
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
答案：Ⅶ. One possible version:
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
China is a country with a lot of traditional handicrafts. I am really interested in Chinese kites.
Kites have a long history of about 2,000 years. Most of them are made of bamboo, silk and paper. Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings. In the past, kites were used for sending messages. Nowadays, it's a good way for people to have fun and exercise. They are seen as a symbol of people's good wishes for a better life.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you.
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文要求学生写一篇文章介绍身边的中国传统手工艺品,应是一篇说明文。
②时态:时态主要为一般现在时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明自己喜欢中国风筝;第二步,介绍风筝的相关信息,包括历史、制作材料、所代表的意义等;第三步,写出总结并表示潍坊是喜欢风筝的人的好去处。
[亮点短语]
①really interested in... 对……很感兴趣 ②a long history of... ……的悠久历史 ③are made of... 由……制成 ④a symbol of... ……的象征
[高分句型]
Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings.
(一般现在时的被动语态)
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，体裁是说明文，时态以一般现在时为主。需围绕思维导图的四个要点（materials、uses、meaning及补充内容），选取身边的中国传统手工艺品（如风筝）写作。第一步点明要介绍的传统手工艺品；第二步详细说明其制作材料、古今用途、象征意义；第三步补充相关内容使文章连贯，同时避免真实信息，保证词数约80词。
【解析】
按写作步骤：
1. 开头点明主题，引出介绍的传统手工艺品（风筝），说明自己对其感兴趣；
2. 中间依次介绍：风筝的历史，制作材料（竹子、丝绸、纸等），古今用途（过去用于传递信息，现在用于娱乐和锻炼），象征意义（对美好生活的祝愿）；
3. 结尾补充潍坊是风筝爱好者的好去处，使文章完整，运用被动语态等句型保证行文流畅，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
China is a country with a lot of traditional handicrafts. I am really interested in Chinese kites.
Kites have a long history of about 2,000 years. Most of them are made of bamboo, silk and paper. Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings. In the past, kites were used for sending messages. Nowadays, it's a good way for people to have fun and exercise. They are seen as a symbol of people's good wishes for a better life.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、传统中国文化英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，选取风筝这一传统手工艺品，覆盖思维导图所有要点，语言流畅，运用被动语态等亮点句型，符合说明文写作要求，词数合适，是优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
