五、书面表达。
假如你住在花园小区，你想为社区献计献策，打造温馨和谐的社区。请根据思维导图，以“To build a better community”为题，写一份演讲稿。
注意：1. 要点齐全并拓展，文章通顺；2. 词数 80 左右，演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 文章中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
To build a better community
Hello, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas for helping the community with you.
I want to organize an activity called "To build a better community". Let's take action to give our community a new life.
First, I'd like to invite some engineers to help the old people learn how to use the Internet and this can make their lives easier. Second, I plan to organize some gardeners to grow flowers and plant trees. We can enjoy beautiful views. Last, I am going to ask parents and their children to collect old books, toys and clothes. I'll sell them to raise money for the old people's home.
I hope you will like my ideas. Let's work together to make our community a better place.
答案：One possible version:
To build a better community
Hello, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas for helping the community with you. I want to organize an activity called "To build a better community". Let's take action to give our community a new life.
First, I'd like to invite some engineers to help the old people learn how to use the Internet and this can make their lives easier. Second, I plan to organize some gardeners to grow flowers and plant trees. We can enjoy beautiful views. Last, I am going to ask parents and their children to collect old books, toys and clothes. I'll sell them to raise money for the old people's home.
I hope you will like my ideas. Let's work together to make our community a better place.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先审题：明确文体是面向社区居民的演讲稿，主题是打造更美好的社区，词数要求80左右，开头和结尾已经给出无需自行创作。接下来梳理思维导图给出的全部核心要点：三类不同群体对应的行动，分别是工程师帮扶老人、园艺师种植花卉绿植、家长和孩子开展收集类公益活动。接下来我们可以用First、Second、Last这类逻辑连接词把三个要点串联起来，给每个要点补充符合生活逻辑的合理细节，比如工程师可以教老人使用互联网，园艺师种花种树美化环境，亲子收集旧物做公益，保证要点齐全、语句通顺，符合演讲稿亲切自然的语气即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接给定的开头，先引出共同行动改造社区的总起句，自然过渡到分点给出具体建议。
2. 第一点对应工程师的相关内容：结合工程师的身份，补充具体帮扶内容，比如教老年人使用互联网，让老人的日常生活更便利，符合设定逻辑。
3. 第二点对应园艺师的相关内容：补充除种花外还可以种树的细节，说明这类行动可以美化社区环境，让所有居民都能欣赏到优美景色，贴合园艺师的工作属性。
4. 第三点对应家长和孩子的相关内容：补充收集的物品为旧书、旧玩具、旧衣物，后续可以通过义卖筹款捐赠给敬老院，让收集活动更有实际意义。
5. 用逻辑连接词串联所有内容，控制总词数在要求范围内，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
To build a better community
Hello, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas for helping the community with you. I want to organize an activity called "To build a better community". Let's take action to give our community a new life.
First, I'd like to invite some engineers to help the old people learn how to use the Internet and this can make their lives easier. Second, I plan to organize some gardeners to grow flowers and plant trees. We can enjoy beautiful views. Last, I am going to ask parents and their children to collect old books, toys and clothes. I'll sell them to raise money for the old people's home.
I hope you will like my ideas. Let's work together to make our community a better place.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
英语演讲稿写作
一般将来时应用
【点评】
本题是给出思维导图提示的应用文写作，要点指向非常明确，学生只需要覆盖全部给定要点，结合生活常识补充合理的细节内容，使用合适的逻辑连接词梳理行文结构，就可以写出符合要求的作文，同时也能引导学生思考社区公益的可行方案，做到学以致用。
【难度系数】
0.7
