五、书面表达。
假设你是来自湖南的李华,你现在在南通上学,你将在学校举办的主题为“I love my hometown”的演讲比赛中介绍你的家乡。请根据表格内容,写一篇英语演讲稿。

注意:1. 要点齐全并适当拓展,文章通顺;2. 词数 80 左右,演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 文章中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello,everyone! I am Li Hua from Hunan. I'll introduce my hometown—Hunan to you.
Hunan lies in the middle of China and to the south - west of Nantong. It is a liveable place.
There are lots of places of interest, such as Zhangjiajie National Forest Park and the Ancient Town of Fenghuang. These attractions are famous for their special beauty of nature. Their rich history and culture also attract many visitors. You can try all kinds of delicious food like rice noodles and stinky tofu. What's more, the people in Hunan are helpful and friendly. You'll feel at home in Hunan.
Hunan is a good place to visit. Welcome to Hunan!
答案:五、One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua from Hunan. I'll introduce my hometown—Hunan to you.
Hunan lies in the middle of China and to the south - west of Nantong. It is a liveable place.
There are lots of places of interest, such as Zhangjiajie National Forest Park and the Ancient Town of Fenghuang. These attractions are famous for their special beauty of nature. Their rich history and culture also attract many visitors. You can try all kinds of delicious food like rice noodles and stinky tofu. What's more, the people in Hunan are helpful and friendly. You'll feel at home in Hunan.
Hunan is a good place to visit. Welcome to Hunan!
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道题,先明确写作任务是写一篇介绍家乡的英语演讲稿,第一步先梳理所有给定的必填要点:地理位置、名胜古迹、特色美食、个人感想四个模块,确保表格给出的所有信息都覆盖不遗漏。第二步确定文体语气,演讲稿要亲切自然,整体选用一般现在时即可。第三步按照逻辑顺序排布内容:先介绍湖南的地理位置,把“位于中国中部、在南通西南方、宜居”三个信息自然整合;接着介绍当地知名景点,列举张家界国家森林公园和凤凰古城,适当补充景点自然风景优美、人文底蕴深厚的合理拓展内容;之后介绍当地特色美食,提到米粉、臭豆腐;最后补充个人感受,比如当地居民热情友善,让游客有宾至如归的感觉,衔接题目给出的结尾,同时控制总词数在80左右,检查没有语法错误即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态:本文为主题演讲类应用文,整体采用一般现在时,语气友好口语化,符合公开演讲的场景要求。
2. 逐点落实写作要点:
① 地理位置部分:用清晰简单的句式说明湖南区位,对应要点写出湖南地处中国中部、位于南通西南方,是宜居的地方。
② 名胜古迹部分:用there be句型引出当地有诸多名胜,列举两个指定景点,适当补充景点特色:自然景观独特、历史文化底蕴深厚,吸引大量游客,完成合理拓展。
③ 人文美食部分:引出当地有各类特色美食,列举米粉、臭豆腐,补充当地居民热情友善的特点丰富内容。
④ 个人感想部分:表达在湖南游玩会有宾至如归的舒适感,贴合演讲主题。
3. 用such as、What's more等过渡词衔接各部分内容,调整语句通顺度,控制词数符合要求,检查无语法错误、无多余真实个人信息即可。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua from Hunan. I'll introduce my hometown—Hunan to you.
Hunan lies in the middle of China and to the south - west of Nantong. It is a liveable place.
There are lots of places of interest, such as Zhangjiajie National Forest Park and the Ancient Town of Fenghuang. These attractions are famous for their special beauty of nature. Their rich history and culture also attract many visitors. You can try all kinds of delicious food like rice noodles and stinky tofu. What's more, the people in Hunan are helpful and friendly. You'll feel at home in Hunan.
Hunan is a good place to visit. Welcome to Hunan!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作,方位表达,话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题属于提纲提示类书面表达,所有核心要点都已明确给出,学生只需要完整覆盖表格全部信息,适当补充合理细节让行文连贯,注意演讲的口语化表达,控制词数在要求范围内即可完成佳作,同时能锻炼学生介绍家乡类话题的英语输出能力。
【难度系数】
0.7