八、书面表达
中国地大物博,旅游资源丰富。假如你的笔友Mike即将来中国旅行,请你向他推荐一个城市作为目的地,并从以下几个方面对这个城市进行介绍。90词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
| location and popular attractions | my experience there | my feelings about the city |
| --- | --- | --- |
China has many wonderful places to visit, and I strongly recommend you to travel to
答案:One possible version:
China has many wonderful places to visit, and I strongly recommend you to travel to Nanjing.
It rests in the lower reaches of the Yangtze River. There are many great attractions. You can visit Zhongshan Mountain National Park. The fantastic mountain view and historic buildings are well worth a visit. You can also take a boat trip along the Qinhuai River at night.
I have been to Nanjing twice with my parents. We walked on the longest city wall in the world and really enjoyed the old - time feel.
I think Nanjing is rich in history and culture. Also, it is convenient to go around thanks to its modern transport.
I'm sure you will love the city.
解析:
【解析】
1. 明确写作任务:向笔友推荐中国城市,需涵盖地理位置与热门景点、个人游览经历、个人对城市的感受三个核心要点,词数控制在90词左右。
2. 结构规划:开篇点明推荐城市为南京;接着介绍南京的地理位置(长江下游)及特色景点(中山陵景区、秦淮河夜游);随后讲述个人两次随父母游览南京、登上明城墙的经历;最后表达对南京历史文化厚重、交通便利的感受,结尾表达对笔友的期待。
3. 语言技巧:运用固定搭配(be well worth a visit)、多样句式,保证语言流畅自然,符合英语书面表达规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
China has many wonderful places to visit, and I strongly recommend you to travel to Nanjing.
It rests in the lower reaches of the Yangtze River. There are many great attractions. You can visit Zhongshan Mountain National Park. The fantastic mountain view and historic buildings are well worth a visit. You can also take a boat trip along the Qinhuai River at night.
I have been to Nanjing twice with my parents. We walked on the longest city wall in the world and really enjoyed the old-time feel.
I think Nanjing is rich in history and culture. Also, it is convenient to go around thanks to its modern transport.
I'm sure you will love the city.
【知识点】
旅游类英语书面表达、英语情景写作、英语句式运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,层次分明,完整覆盖所有写作要点,语言地道流畅,使用了丰富的固定搭配与多样句式,符合词数要求,能清晰直观地向笔友介绍推荐城市,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7