八、书面表达
学校近期发起了"文明伴我行 (Civilization with me)"主题实践活动,鼓励大家在校园和日常生活中表现良好的礼仪。请以 "Be a student with good manners" 为题写一篇短文,介绍同学们具体应当有什么样的表现,并谈谈你对这个活动的看法,90词左右。
Be a student with good manners
答案：One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
Our school has started with the "Civilization with me" activity to encourage good manners.
In our daily lives, when communicating with others, we should show respect by greeting them warmly and smiling. We should also realize the importance of honesty and be ready to lend a hand to those in need. When in public, remember to keep quiet in places like libraries and wait in line patiently. Don't litter or pick flowers in parks.
I think this activity is very meaningful. It helps us develop good habits and makes our school a more pleasant place to study.
解析：
【解析】
这是一篇话题类书面表达，写作时需紧扣“文明伴我行”主题，先点明活动背景，再分别从与人交流、公共场合行为两个方面阐述文明行为要求，最后表达对活动的看法。写作要注意覆盖表格要点，控制字数在90词左右，语言要简洁地道，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
Our school has started with the "Civilization with me" activity to encourage good manners.
In our daily lives, when communicating with others, we should show respect by greeting them warmly and smiling. We should also realize the importance of honesty and be ready to lend a hand to those in need. When in public, remember to keep quiet in places like libraries and wait in line patiently. Don't litter or pick flowers in parks.
I think this activity is very meaningful. It helps us develop good habits and makes our school a more pleasant place to study.
【知识点】
话题类书面表达、日常礼仪英语表达、观点阐述句型
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖表格中的所有要点，结构清晰，分为活动引入、文明行为阐述、活动看法三部分，语言简洁地道，符合写作字数要求，能很好地传递文明行为的具体内容与活动的意义。
【难度系数】
0.6
