(二)
Mr Brown looks out of his window. There is a boy in the street. He is eating a sandwich. There is a dog in the street too. The boy says, "Come here, good dog. I'm going to give you some sandwiches." The dog comes up. The boy kicks the dog. The dog runs away. Mr Brown comes out of the house and says to the boy, "Come here. I'm going to give you some money." The boy is happy and goes to Mr Brown. But Mr Brown doesn't give him any money. He kicks the boy. The boy cries and says, "Why do you kick me? I don't ask you for any money." "The dog doesn't ask you for anything," Mr Brown says. "But you kick it."
根据短文内容,判断下列句子的正误,正确的画"√",错误的画"×"。
(
×
)1. The boy is having some bread in the street.
(
√
)2. The boy doesn't give the dog anything.
(
×
)3. The boy likes the dog.
(
×
)4. Mr Brown wants to give the boy some money.
(
√
)5. Mr Brown plans to give the boy a lesson.
答案：(二) 1. × 2. √ 3. × 4. × 5. √
解析：
【分析】
做这类正误判断题，核心思路是定位原文细节，对比题目表述：首先通读短文了解整体内容，然后针对每个题目，回到原文找到对应的描述，仔细核对信息是否一致，同时结合上下文逻辑判断句子是否符合文意。比如第1题要关注男孩吃的食物，第4题要注意布朗先生说给男孩钱的真实目的，不能只看表面表述。
【解析】
1. 原文明确提到“He is eating a sandwich.”，题目中说男孩在吃bread（面包），与原文不符，所以该句错误，画×。
2. 原文中男孩说要给狗三明治，但实际“The boy kicks the dog. The dog runs away.”，说明男孩并未给狗任何东西，该句与原文一致，画√。
3. 男孩踢了狗的行为表明他并不喜欢狗，题目表述与文意相反，画×。
4. 原文中Mr Brown说要给男孩钱只是为了让男孩过来，实际“But Mr Brown doesn't give him any money. He kicks the boy.”，说明他根本不想给男孩钱，题目表述错误，画×。
5. Mr Brown看到男孩踢狗后，用同样的方式对待男孩，并且说“The dog doesn't ask you for anything," Mr Brown says. "But you kick it."，可见他的目的是让男孩认识到错误，给男孩一个教训，该句符合文意，画√。
【答案】
(二) 1. × 2. √ 3. × 4. × 5. √
【知识点】
阅读理解细节判断、短文信息提取、逻辑推理判断
【点评】
这篇短文通过生活化的小故事考查学生的阅读理解能力，既需要精准抓取原文细节，又需要结合上下文理解人物行为的深层目的。解题时需避免被表面表述误导，养成逐句核对原文的习惯，能有效提升答题准确率。
【难度系数】
0.6
拓展提高
书面表达
每一个人都有一些好的习惯和一些不好的习惯。请你以“My good habit”为题介绍一个你的好习惯,以及这个好习惯为你带来了哪些益处。你也可以以“My bad habit”为题介绍一个你曾经有或者现在还存在的坏习惯,以及这个坏习惯给你带来的影响。短文不少于10句话。
答案：My good habit
I have a good habit of reading every day. I love reading books. I usually read for about an hour before going to bed. Reading different kinds of books makes me know a lot about the world. It helps me learn new words and expressions, so my language skills have improved. I can write better compositions now. Also, reading makes me think more deeply. It's like taking a journey to different places and times. When I read, I forget about my worries. It relaxes me. This good habit has become an important part of my life. I will keep it forever.
解析：
【分析】
首先要确定写作主题，选择熟悉且易展开的内容，这里选“My good habit”更容易写出具体益处。第一步，开头直接点明自己的好习惯，比如每天阅读，快速抓住主题；第二步，描述习惯的具体做法，比如阅读的时间、频率，让内容更真实具体；第三步，详细阐述好习惯带来的多方面益处，这是文章核心，可从增长见识、提升能力、放松心情等角度展开，确保内容充实；第四步，结尾总结习惯的重要性，表达坚持的决心。同时要保证句子数量不少于10句，语言连贯自然，用合适的衔接词让逻辑更清晰。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接表明拥有每天阅读的好习惯，让读者快速明确主题：I have a good habit of reading every day. I love reading books.
2. 描述习惯细节：说明阅读的固定时间，使习惯更具象：I usually read for about an hour before going to bed.
3. 多角度阐述益处：
拓展认知：Reading different kinds of books makes me know a lot about the world.
提升语言能力：It helps me learn new words and expressions, so my language skills have improved.
提高写作水平：I can write better compositions now.
促进深度思考：Also, reading makes me think more deeply.
带来精神体验：It's like taking a journey to different places and times.
舒缓情绪：When I read, I forget about my worries. It relaxes me.
4. 结尾升华：强调习惯的重要性，表达坚持的决心：This good habit has become an important part of my life. I will keep it forever.
全文结构清晰，从点题到细节描述，再到益处阐述，最后总结，逻辑连贯，内容贴合主题且满足字数要求。
【答案】
My good habit
I have a good habit of reading every day. I love reading books. I usually read for about an hour before going to bed. Reading different kinds of books makes me know a lot about the world. It helps me learn new words and expressions, so my language skills have improved. I can write better compositions now. Also, reading makes me think more deeply. It's like taking a journey to different places and times. When I read, I forget about my worries. It relaxes me. This good habit has become an important part of my life. I will keep it forever.
【知识点】
1. 习惯类书面表达
2. 英语语句连贯技巧
3. 日常话题词汇运用
【点评】
本文围绕“每日阅读”的好习惯展开，结构完整、逻辑清晰，内容充实且贴近生活。从习惯的具体践行到多维度的积极影响，描述细致，语言简洁地道，完全符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的话题写作范文，能为同类写作提供很好的参考。
【难度系数】
0.7
