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同学们,请你根据以下信息,组织好语言,写一篇有关澳大利亚的短文。
Cities:Sydney,Melbourne
Weather:warm and sunny
Interesting animals:kangaroos and koalas
Interesting sport:Australian football
Today,I’ll tell you something about Australia.




















答案:Today,I’ll tell you something about Australia. Australia is a beautiful country. It has many famous cities, such as Sydney and Melbourne. The weather there is usually warm and sunny. People can enjoy sunny days all year round.
Australia is also home to many interesting animals. You can see kangaroos jumping around in the wild and koalas sleeping in trees. They are so cute and unique.
One of the most exciting things in Australia is Australian football. It is a fun and fast-paced sport. People all over the country love it very much.
I hope one day I can visit Australia and see all these wonderful things for myself.
解析:
【分析】
首先,我们要围绕题目给出的澳大利亚相关信息来构建短文,开头已给出,接下来的思路如下:
1. 先总起介绍澳大利亚,让短文开篇自然;
2. 依次引入给定的信息点:先介绍知名城市悉尼和墨尔本,用举例的方式清晰呈现;
3. 接着描述当地温暖晴朗的天气,可适当补充人们能享受阳光的内容,让描述更具体;
4. 然后介绍有趣的动物袋鼠和考拉,通过描述它们的状态(袋鼠跳跃、考拉睡在树上)让内容更生动;
5. 再介绍特色运动澳式足球,说明它的特点和受欢迎程度;
6. 最后用表达个人向往的句子收尾,让短文结构完整、情感饱满。
【解析】
步骤1:总起引入,点明澳大利亚是美丽的国家,衔接开头:Australia is a beautiful country.
步骤2:介绍城市,用such as引出给定的悉尼和墨尔本:It has many famous cities, such as Sydney and Melbourne.
步骤3:描述天气,补充人们可常年享受晴天的内容:The weather there is usually warm and sunny. People can enjoy sunny days all year round.
步骤4:介绍特色动物,描述它们的状态:Australia is also home to many interesting animals. You can see kangaroos jumping around in the wild and koalas sleeping in trees. They are so cute and unique.
步骤5:介绍特色运动,说明其特点和受欢迎度:One of the most exciting things in Australia is Australian football. It is a fun and fast-paced sport. People all over the country love it very much.
步骤6:收尾表达向往:I hope one day I can visit Australia and see all these wonderful things for myself.
将以上内容连贯组合,就形成完整的短文。
【答案】
Today,I’ll tell you something about Australia. Australia is a beautiful country. It has many famous cities, such as Sydney and Melbourne. The weather there is usually warm and sunny. People can enjoy sunny days all year round.
Australia is also home to many interesting animals. You can see kangaroos jumping around in the wild and koalas sleeping in trees. They are so cute and unique.
One of the most exciting things in Australia is Australian football. It is a fun and fast-paced sport. People all over the country love it very much.
I hope one day I can visit Australia and see all these wonderful things for myself.
【知识点】
1. 英语说明文写作
2. 信息整合运用
3. 国家话题写作
【点评】
这篇短文紧扣题目给定的所有信息点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,从国家概况到城市、天气、动物、运动,最后以个人愿望收尾,层次分明。语言简洁生动,通过对动物状态、运动特点的细节描述,让内容更丰富饱满,符合英语短文写作的要求,能很好地完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
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