五、书面表达
近年来,洛阳文旅火爆出圈,吸引了大批国内外游客。假如你是当地导游,请根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的演讲稿,介绍这座魅力古城。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear visitors, welcome to Luoyang! Today I'd like to introduce this wonderful and charming city to you.
Luoyang sits quietly on the banks of the Yellow River. As a city with a long history, it is one of the birthplaces of Chinese culture.
There are many amazing tourist attractions in Luoyang. Among them, the Longmen Grottoes are a must-see. As one of the oldest caves in China, they are fine examples of ancient stone carving art.
Besides, Luoyang has been well known for its peonies for a long time. Every spring, the lovely flowers attract tourists from home and abroad.
When you come to Luoyang, don't forget to try all kinds of local food, like huimian. It is special and delicious.
Luoyang is truly a perfect mix of natural beauty and rich culture. Wish you an amazing and unforgettable trip here!
答案：Dear visitors, welcome to Luoyang! Today I'd like to introduce this wonderful and
charming city to you.
Luoyang sits quietly on the banks of the Yellow River. As a city with a long history, it
is one of the birthplaces of Chinese culture.
There are many amazing tourist attractions in Luoyang. Among them, the Longmen
Grottoes are a must-see. As one of the oldest caves in China, they are fine examples of
ancient stone carving art.
Besides, Luoyang has been well known for its peonies for a long time. Every spring,
the lovely flowers attract tourists from home and abroad.
When you come to Luoyang, don't forget to try all kinds of local food, like huimian.
It is special and delicious.
Luoyang is truly a perfect mix of natural beauty and rich culture. Wish you an amazing
and unforgettable trip here!
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇以导游身份撰写的城市介绍演讲稿，解题时首先对应题干给出的四个写作模块梳理内容逻辑：第一部分先完成城市基础介绍，交代洛阳的地理位置和悠久历史；第二部分选取1-2个代表性景点做简要说明，比如标志性的龙门石窟；第三部分围绕洛阳的核心特色牡丹展开介绍；最后补充美食等其他实用内容。写作时要注意语气亲切自然，符合导游面向游客讲解的场景，控制正文内容词数在90左右，确保所有提示要点不遗漏，用简单过渡词衔接行文，最后自然衔接题目给出的首尾句即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，首先完成城市基础介绍要点：点明洛阳坐落于黄河沿岸，是拥有悠久历史的古都，也是华夏文化的发源地之一。
2. 接下来完成旅游景点介绍要点：选取标志性景点龙门石窟，说明它是游客必打卡的景点，是中国古代石雕艺术的优秀代表。
3. 之后完成城市特色介绍要点：点明洛阳素来以牡丹闻名，每年春季盛放的牡丹会吸引大量海内外游客。
4. 最后补充其他内容要点：推荐当地特色美食比如烩面，丰富介绍内容，之后衔接题目给出的结尾句，最后通读全文检查语法错误，确认所有要点都覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear visitors, welcome to Luoyang! Today I'd like to introduce this wonderful and charming city to you.
Luoyang sits quietly on the banks of the Yellow River. As a city with a long history, it is one of the birthplaces of Chinese culture.
There are many amazing tourist attractions in Luoyang. Among them, the Longmen Grottoes are a must-see. As one of the oldest caves in China, they are fine examples of ancient stone carving art.
Besides, Luoyang has been well known for its peonies for a long time. Every spring, the lovely flowers attract tourists from home and abroad.
When you come to Luoyang, don't forget to try all kinds of local food, like huimian. It is special and delicious.
Luoyang is truly a perfect mix of natural beauty and rich culture. Wish you an amazing and unforgettable trip here!
【知识点】
地点介绍写作，演讲稿应用文，话题词汇运用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖题干所有提示要点，行文逻辑层层递进，从城市概况到景点、特色物产再到美食推荐过渡自然，语气亲切贴合导游讲解的身份设定，用词准确地道，篇幅符合90词左右的要求，是一篇非常规范的介绍类应用文。同学们写作时可以参考该结构，优先把所有要点表述完整，再适当添加过渡词提升行文流畅度。
【难度系数】
0.6
