五、书面表达
懂礼仪、守规矩是每一名学生必备的良好素养。无论身处何地，我们都要时刻规范自身的言行举止。请根据以下图片提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈一谈我们应当如何在校园和公共场所践行文明礼仪。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also
show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to
help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We
shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are
waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we
shouln't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in
public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先审题：明确写作主题是介绍学生在校园和公共场所应当践行的文明礼仪，体裁是说明类短文，人称使用第一人称we，时态统一用一般现在时。接下来梳理写作逻辑：首先承接题目给出的开头句，先完成"At school"部分的内容，先把题干提示的两个核心要点：按时到校、尊重老师先写出来，再补充1-2个符合校园场景的合理文明礼仪细节，比如友爱同学、保持校园整洁等；之后过渡到"In public places"部分，把题干提示的遵守交通规则、耐心排队两个要点写出来，再补充公共场所的合理礼仪细节，比如不大声喧哗、不推挤他人等；最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾句，行文过程中用合适的逻辑连接词串联内容，控制总词数符合90词左右的要求，避免语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 明确写作要求：覆盖两个场景下的全部提示要点，内容贴合文明礼仪主题，语句通顺，词数符合要求，时态统一使用一般现在时。
2. 搭建行文结构：
① 校园部分用At school引出内容：首先点明要按时到校，接着说明要礼貌问候老师表达尊重，再补充友爱同学、维护校园环境、不在走廊奔跑等合理校园礼仪内容。
② 公共场所部分用In public places过渡：首先点明要遵守交通规则保障自身安全，接着说明候车、购物时要自觉排队耐心等候，再补充不在公共场合大声喧哗、不推挤他人避免打扰旁人的相关礼仪内容。
3. 用first of all, besides, also等连接词串联所有内容，检查语法错误，保证行文流畅，自然衔接题目给出的结尾即可完成写作。
【答案】
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
【知识点】
情景作文写作
固定短语搭配
一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题是贴近学生日常校园与公共生活的提示类书面表达，题干给出了核心写作要点，大幅降低了跑题的概率，学生只需要将提示的要点用正确的英语表达出来，补充少量符合场景的合理礼仪细节，用逻辑连接词串联成通顺的文段，控制词数符合要求即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
