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八、书面表达(25分)
假设你们学校下周将举办慈善日活动,当天安排了以下三项活动。请选择其中一项参与,写一篇90词左右的英语短文,并说明你选择该活动的理由、具体规划以及期望达成的愿望。开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Next week's Charity Day offers three meaningful activities, and I decide to visit










答案:Next week's Charity Day offers three meaningful activities, and I decide to visit the
House for the Orphans.
The children without parents often feel lonely. Many of them have no confidence to
communicate with others. It's necessary for us to show our care and bring warmth to their lives.
Before the visit, I will collect some lovely toys and picture books for them. Besides,
my classmates and I plan to organize a charity sale to raise money for them. During the
visit, we will play games and tell jokes to cheer them up. We will also listen patiently to
their trouble and encourage them to talk more about their dreams.
I hope this visit can help the children build confidence. I also wish more people will pay
attention to orphans and give a helping hand.
解析:
【分析】
这道书面表达题的解题思路非常清晰:第一步,先从给出的三个慈善活动里选定其中一个,补全开头的空缺部分;第二步,紧扣题干要求的三个核心要素展开内容:首先说明选择该活动的理由,点明对应帮扶群体的实际处境,阐述参与活动的意义;其次写清楚具体的行动规划,可以按活动前、活动中的顺序梳理要做的具体事项,内容要贴合所选活动的场景,真实合理;最后写明自己参与活动的期望,既可以写对帮扶对象的美好祝愿,也可以延伸出呼吁更多人关注相关群体的想法。写作时注意语句衔接自然,控制总词数在要求范围内,不要遗漏题干要求的得分要点。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇补全开头:选定探访孤儿院的活动,补全空缺部分,明确自己的选择。
2. 阐述选择理由:点明孤儿缺少父母陪伴,容易感到孤独、缺乏和他人交流的自信,我们的关爱能够为他们的生活带去温暖,点明参与该活动的必要性。
3. 说明具体规划:分探访前和探访中两个部分安排内容:探访前准备玩具、绘本,和同学组织义卖为他们筹钱;探访过程中陪他们玩游戏、讲笑话,耐心倾听他们的烦恼,鼓励他们分享自己的梦想。
4. 收尾写期望:说明自己希望这次活动能帮助孩子们建立自信,也希望更多人能够关注孤儿群体,向他们伸出援手。
最终整合所有内容,调整语句流畅度,得到完整短文。
【答案】
Next week's Charity Day offers three meaningful activities, and I decide to visit the House for the Orphans.
The children without parents often feel lonely. Many of them have no confidence to communicate with others. It's necessary for us to show our care and bring warmth to their lives.
Before the visit, I will collect some lovely toys and picture books for them. Besides, my classmates and I plan to organize a charity sale to raise money for them. During the visit, we will play games and tell jokes to cheer them up. We will also listen patiently to their trouble and encourage them to talk more about their dreams.
I hope this visit can help the children build confidence. I also wish more people will pay attention to orphans and give a helping hand.
【知识点】
英语书面表达
主题类写作
要点整合
【点评】
本题属于初中英语典型的提示类半开放写作,既给定了明确的写作场景和核心要点,又给学生留出了自主发挥的空间,既考查学生的英语语句组织、词汇运用能力,也引导学生树立关爱弱势群体、热心公益的意识。参考范文完整覆盖了选择理由、活动规划、个人期望三个得分点,逻辑连贯,用词贴合主题,完全符合题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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