八、书面表达(本题满分20分)
76. 近期,校园英语周将举行以"好习惯,促成长"为主题的征文活动。请你以"Good learning habits make me a good English learner"为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容要点:
1. 在英语学习中,你有哪些好习惯?(至少两点)
2. 你在哪些方面还需要改进?(至少两点)
3. 你有哪些改进措施?(至少两点)
注意事项:
1. 短文须包括所给内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
3. 文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
Good learning habits make me a good English learner
As we all know, good habits are very important in our daily life, especially to us students. As for me, I have some good habits in English learning.
On the one hand, I read English books every day to improve my reading skills. On the other hand, I keep an English notebook to write down new words and useful expressions. These habits help me a lot.
However, I still need to improve in some areas. For example, I am not good at listening, and I am too shy to speak English in class. To solve these problems, I plan to listen to English songs and watch English movies more often. Besides, I will try to talk with my classmates in English to practise speaking.
I hope I will get better grades and make greater progress in the future.
解析:
【分析】
本题要求以“Good learning habits make me a good English learner”为题写英语短文,需覆盖三个核心要点:英语学习的好习惯(至少两点)、需改进的方面(至少两点)、改进措施(至少两点),同时要行文连贯、词数约90词、无真实信息。解题思路为:先承接开头段,用连接词引出自己的两个好习惯;再转折说明待改进的两个问题;接着对应给出两个改进措施;最后结尾呼应主题,确保内容完整、结构清晰、语言连贯。
【解析】
写作遵循“好习惯-待改进-措施”的结构:1. 好习惯部分:用“On the one hand...On the other hand...”连接,选取“每天读英语书提升阅读”“记英语笔记积累新单词和表达”两个要点;2. 待改进部分:用“However”转折,选取“听力薄弱”“不敢在课堂说英语”两个问题;3. 改进措施部分:用“For example”“Besides”衔接,对应问题写“听英文歌/看英文电影练听力”“和同学用英语交流练口语”;4. 结尾呼应主题,表达期望,确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good learning habits make me a good English learner
As we all know,good habits are very important in our daily life,especially to us students. As for me,I have some good habits in English learning.
On the one hand,I read English books every day to improve my reading skills. On the other hand,I keep an English notebook to write down new words and useful expressions. These habits help me a lot.
However,I still need to improve in some areas. For example,I am not good at listening,and I am too shy to speak English in class. To solve these problems,I plan to listen to English songs and watch English movies more often. Besides,I will try to talk with my classmates in English to practise speaking.
I hope I will get better grades and make greater progress in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、主题短文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有内容要点,结构清晰,使用恰当连接词使行文连贯,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,是一篇符合题目要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.3