经典例题
请根据以下信息,以“The Seasons of the Year”为题,写一篇英语短文。

【要求】1. 不要写成诗歌,90词左右。
2. 不要遗漏任何要点,句子表达正确,行文连贯。
答案:# The Seasons of the Year
There are four wonderful seasons in a year.
Spring is windy and bright. We love to fly kites on fine days, and bees and butterflies fly among colourful flowers.
Summer is very hot. We can go swimming and eat tasty ice cream to feel cool.
In autumn, leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy harvesting their crops.
Winter is cold. We wear thick clothes to keep warm, and we always have great fun making a snowman when it snows. I love all the seasons of the year.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道写作题,首先先明确核心要求:以The Seasons of the Year为题,不能写成诗歌,词数控制在90词左右,不能遗漏表格给出的所有季节相关要点。接下来梳理清晰写作思路:首先开篇总起,点明一年共有四个季节,作为全文的总引入;之后按照春、夏、秋、冬的常规认知顺序依次展开,把表格里每个季节对应的提示短语,补充合适的主语、衔接词整合成通顺完整的句子,确保所有给出的信息点一个都不落下;最后收尾简单表达自己对四季的感受,让文章结构完整,写完后通读检查语法错误,调整语句让行文连贯即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇总起:用"There are four wonderful seasons in a year."开门见山,引出下文对四季的介绍。
2. 分述春季:整合春季的所有提示信息,写出对应语句,覆盖春季所有要点:多风晴朗、放风筝、蜂蝶在花间飞舞。
3. 分述夏季:整合夏季提示信息,写出对应语句,完整覆盖夏季全部要点:天气炎热、去游泳、吃冰淇淋。
4. 分述秋季:整合秋季提示信息,写出对应语句,覆盖秋季全部要点:树叶变黄、农民收割庄稼。
5. 分述冬季:整合冬季提示信息,写出对应语句,覆盖冬季全部要点:天气寒冷、穿厚衣服保暖、堆雪人。
6. 收尾点题:补充一句对四季的喜爱作为收尾,让文章结构完整,通读检查确认没有遗漏要点,词数符合90词左右的要求,语句通顺没有语法错误。
【答案】
# The Seasons of the Year
There are four wonderful seasons in a year.
Spring is windy and bright. We love to fly kites on fine days, and bees and butterflies fly among colourful flowers.
Summer is very hot. We can go swimming and eat tasty ice cream to feel cool.
In autumn, leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy harvesting their crops.
Winter is cold. We wear thick clothes to keep warm, and we always have great fun making a snowman when it snows. I love all the seasons of the year.
【知识点】
季节主题写作
英语语句连贯表达
写作要点整合
【点评】
本文严格符合题目的各项要求,没有遗漏任何给定的提示要点,按照四季的时间顺序行文逻辑非常清晰,衔接自然流畅,在给定短语的基础上补充了少量合理的细节让内容更生动,词数控制在要求范围内,没有语法错误,是一篇非常规范的初级英语写景小短文,适合低年级学生参考学习。
【难度系数】
0.7