(2025·江苏泰州姜堰区第一教研站调研)假如你是Lily,目前在英国的一所中学读八年级。请你写一封电子邮件给你的中国好友王丽,向她介绍一下你的新朋友Helen以及你丰富多彩的学校生活。

【要求】1. 文章必须包含所提供的所有信息,并可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 90词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Li,
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lily
答案:How is everything going? I have a new friend called Helen at my new school. She is a pretty girl with a round face. She has a good sense of humour, and she always tells me funny jokes when I feel upset, so I never feel bored staying with her. She is also very helpful, last week she spent one hour helping me work out my hard maths problems. My school life here is really colourful, I can join different clubs and take part in all kinds of fun activities every week.
解析:
【分析】
这是一篇提示类电子邮件写作题,解题思路如下:1. 首先明确写作身份是在英国读八年级的Lily,收信人为中国好友王丽,核心写作内容分为两块:介绍新朋友Helen、介绍自己的多彩校园生活。2. 先梳理所有给定的必写要点:Helen的外貌(漂亮、圆脸)、有幽默感并补充对应示例、乐于助人并补充对应示例、介绍多彩校园生活。3. 行文逻辑上先以日常问候开篇,依次介绍Helen的外貌、两个性格特质及对应例子,最后过渡到校园生活的描述,控制总词数在90词左右,避开真实人名校名,保证语句通顺符合日常邮件的表达语气。
【解析】
1. 开篇先用日常问候句自然引出话题,点明自己在新学校交到了新朋友Helen。
2. 外貌描写部分直接对应给定要点,清晰点明Helen的外形特征。
3. 幽默感部分补充符合学生日常场景的示例,说明她的幽默感给自己带来的正向感受,完成该要点的举例要求。
4. 乐于助人部分补充符合校园场景的合理示例,用具体事件体现她的热心特质,完成该要点的举例要求。
5. 最后过渡到校园生活,补充贴合英国中学场景的拓展内容,对应多彩校园生活的要点,所有内容衔接自然,总词数符合题干要求。
【答案】
How is everything going? I have a new friend called Helen at my new school. She is a pretty girl with a round face. She has a good sense of humour, and she always tells me funny jokes when I feel upset, so I never feel bored staying with her. She is also very helpful, last week she spent one hour helping me work out my hard maths problems. My school life here is really colourful, I can join different clubs and take part in all kinds of fun activities every week.
【知识点】
电子邮件写作,人物描写,要点作文
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础应用文写作,所有核心要点都已明确给出,学生只需要按照合理逻辑串联内容,给两个性格特质补充符合日常校园场景的合理示例即可,难度较低,需要注意不要遗漏任何给定要点,同时控制词数不要超出要求范围,避免出现基础语法错误。
【难度系数】
0.7