经典例题
(2025·江苏无锡宜兴丁蜀学区调研)假如你是婷婷,你想给你的美国笔友 Tom 写一封邮件,介绍你的学校和学校生活。

【注意】1.90词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.必须包含所有要点,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、完整。
Hi, Tom!
Thanks for your email. Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
I think my school is great and my school life is colourful. I have much fun here.
All the best,
Tingting
答案:I am a student in Grade Eight. Our classes start at 8 a.m. every weekday, and our lunchtime lasts for one and a half hours. We have bright and tidy classrooms for all our lessons, and we have a wide range of subjects such as Chinese, Maths, English and Physics. There are many clubs and after-school activities in our school. I join the drawing club and always have a good time with my partners there after class.
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求:身份是婷婷,写给美国笔友Tom,主题是介绍自己的学校和校园生活,需要覆盖表格里所有的要点,90词左右,开头结尾已经给出不计入总词数,不能生硬逐句翻译。我们的思考顺序是:第一步先点明自己八年级学生的身份,对应个人信息要点;第二步依次介绍学校相关内容,先补充符合日常实际的上课时间、午餐时长,再介绍教室环境,接着说明学校开设的丰富科目;第三步介绍课后活动,还可以补充一个自己参与的具体俱乐部的小细节,让内容更真实自然,行文连贯,所有要点都不遗漏,同时控制总词数符合要求。
【解析】
我们按照逻辑顺序串联所有要点,适当补充合理细节让内容流畅自然:
1. 首先交代个人身份,对应个人信息要点:I am a student in Grade Eight.
2. 接着介绍校园作息,补充符合初中日常的合理时间:Our classes start at 8 a.m. every weekday, and our lunchtime lasts for one and a half hours.
3. 接下来介绍校园环境和开设的科目:We have bright and tidy classrooms for all our lessons, and we have a wide range of subjects such as Chinese, Maths, English and Physics.
4. 最后介绍课后活动,补充个人参与的具体俱乐部的细节,让内容更生动:There are many clubs and after-school activities in our school. I join the drawing club and always have a good time with my partners there after class.
所有要点全部覆盖,行文连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】
I am a student in Grade Eight. Our classes start at 8 a.m. every weekday, and our lunchtime lasts for one and a half hours. We have bright and tidy classrooms for all our lessons, and we have a wide range of subjects such as Chinese, Maths, English and Physics. There are many clubs and after-school activities in our school. I join the drawing club and always have a good time with my partners there after class.
【知识点】
英文邮件写作,校园话题表达,提纲类写作
【点评】
本题是初中常见的提纲类应用文写作,难度较低,只需要学生完整覆盖所有给定要点,避免生硬逐句翻译,适当补充少量符合生活实际的细节让行文连贯自然,注意控制词数,贴合给笔友写信的轻松日常语气即可完成,能够有效锻炼学生基础写作的要点整合能力。
【难度系数】
0.7