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B. 写作。(计20分)
你校“The Wildlife Protection Society”正在招募新成员。假如你是Daniel,请你以“Protect the Earth and Love Wildlife”为题写一篇演讲稿,申请加入该协会。

【要求】1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,要点顺序可调整,以使短文连贯通顺。
2. 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Protect the Earth and Love Wildlife
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.










答案:B. One possible version
Protect the Earth and Love Wildlife
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.
I'm an eighth grader. I'm honest and friendly. I love animals and nature. I am willing to share a home with other living things. However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. I hope to learn more about wild animals. Besides, we can make more friends in this society. People cut down trees and forests, so many animals have nowhere to live. And we make more space for farms and buildings, so many wild animals lose their living areas. Some hunters hunt animals for money. Many wild animals die because of this. The government should take action to protect the environment and wild animals. It should make laws and plant more trees to protect them. As students, we should try our best to do something to protect them. If we all do something to protect them, we will have a better world.
That's all. Thank you very much!
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作定位:这是一篇申请加入野生动物保护协会的主题演讲稿,首先要把题干表格里给出的所有必填要点全部梳理出来,避免遗漏:第一部分先介绍个人信息,对应表格里的八年级、诚实友善、热爱动物和自然的内容;第二部分说明入会理由,除了给定的想要了解更多野生动物知识,补充合理的同好交友、参与保护实践的内容;第三部分点明野生动物当前的生存困境,除了栖息地丧失,补充非法捕猎等符合现实的合理问题;第四部分写出对应期望,分别从政府立法保护、学生主动践行宣传两个角度展开。写作时注意语气要诚恳符合申请场景,语句衔接自然,控制总词数符合要求,不要出现真实人名校名。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开头,首先进行自我介绍:说明自己是八年级学生,性格诚实友善,一直热爱动物与大自然,愿意和所有生命共享美好家园,快速让听众了解自己的基本情况。
2. 接着阐述申请入会的原因:一方面希望能在协会中学习到更多和野生动物相关的专业知识,另一方面也能结识更多志同道合的伙伴,一起参与野生动物保护的相关活动。
3. 之后点明当前野生动物面临的严峻问题:人类不断砍伐森林拓展农田与建筑用地,导致野生动物不断失去栖息地,还有不少捕猎者为了利益猎杀野生动物,大量野生动物的生存受到严重威胁。
4. 最后提出对应的保护期望:希望政府可以出台相关法律法规,采取实际行动保护野生动物的生存环境,严厉打击非法捕猎行为;作为学生的我们也要从自身小事做起,主动宣传保护野生动物的理念,为守护自然贡献自己的力量。
5. 最后按照演讲稿的格式礼貌收尾致谢,全文所有要点全部覆盖,逻辑连贯,符合写作要求。
【答案】
Protect the Earth and Love Wildlife
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.
I'm an eighth grader. I'm honest and friendly. I love animals and nature. I am willing to share a home with other living things. However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. I hope to learn more about wild animals. Besides, we can make more friends in this society. People cut down trees and forests, so many animals have nowhere to live. And we make more space for farms and buildings, so many wild animals lose their living areas. Some hunters hunt animals for money. Many wild animals die because of this. The government should take action to protect the environment and wild animals. It should make laws and plant more trees to protect them. As students, we should try our best to do something to protect them. If we all do something to protect them, we will have a better world.
That's all. Thank you very much!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
主题作文谋篇布局
野生动物相关表达
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部写作要点,行文逻辑从自我介绍到阐述入会初衷,再到点明野生动物生存困境、提出对应保护期望,层层递进,符合演讲稿诚恳正式的表达要求,补充的拓展内容完全贴合主题没有偏离,语句衔接流畅自然,词数符合题干要求,没有出现违规的真实个人信息,是一篇非常规范的申请类主题演讲稿。同学们写作时要注意优先保证所有给定要点都完整呈现,再用合适的连接词让行文更通顺。
【难度系数】
0.6
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