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本单元我们通过学习绿色生活的具体行动措施,知道了如何更好地保护我们的地球。请运用本单元所学内容,向大家分享你是如何通过践行绿色环保的生活方式来为保护地球献出自己的一份力量的。
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Going green
The Earth is our only home, so we should go green to keep our planet healthy and clean. Everyone can help take care of the planet.
To live a green life, I do many small things in my daily life. First, I walk to school instead of taking a car or a bus. It’s a good way to save energy. Second, I use both sides of the paper to save wood. Third, I always remember to turn off the tap when I brush my teeth or wash my face. Water is useful so we should learn to save water.
It is important for us to go green. Let’s work together for a better and greener Earth!
答案:参考范文:
# Going green
The Earth is our only home, so we should go green to keep our planet healthy and clean. Everyone can do something to help protect our home.
I have many green habits in my daily life. First, I always go to school by bike, it helps save energy and keep the air clean. Second, I never throw the reusable bottles away, I can use them to hold my pens and pencils. Third, I always turn off the lights when I do not need them, this helps save a lot of electricity.
It is important for us to go green. Let's work together for a better and greener Earth!
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题,要求围绕“践行绿色环保生活”展开写作。解题思路为:首先点明地球是人类唯一的家园,引出践行绿色生活的重要意义;其次列举具体的绿色环保行为,用First、Second、Third等词清晰分层;最后首尾呼应,再次强调绿色生活的重要性并呼吁大家共同行动。
【解析】
写作时需遵循“总-分-总”结构:1. 开头段:点明地球是唯一家园,说明践行绿色生活的必要性;2. 主体段:用First、Second、Third列举具体的绿色行为,如选择低碳出行、节约资源、节约能源等;3. 结尾段:再次强调绿色生活的重要性,呼吁大家一起为更环保的地球努力。
【答案】
Going green
The Earth is our only home, so we should go green to keep our planet healthy and clean. Everyone can do something to help protect our home.
I have many green habits in my daily life. First, I always go to school by bike, it helps save energy and keep the air clean. Second, I never throw the reusable bottles away, I can use them to hold my pens and pencils. Third, I always turn off the lights when I do not need them, this helps save a lot of electricity.
It is important for us to go green. Let's work together for a better and greener Earth!
【知识点】
英语主题写作、绿色环保话题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕特定主题组织英语语言进行写作的能力,要求结构清晰、内容具体,贴合环保主题,同时考查学生对日常环保行为的积累与英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
小试身手
(黑龙江哈尔滨市月考)假设你是李华,你将参加一个以“Live a green life”为题的英语演讲比赛,请你根据要求撰写演讲稿。内容需包括:1. “绿色生活”的意义和具体措施;2. 向同学们发出号召。(不少于60词,已给出内容不计入总词数)
Live a green life
Living a green life is an active commitment(承诺) we make to our planet, starting with our daily decisions.
Why do we need to live a green life? Due to all kinds of pollution and damage(破坏), the Earth is in poor condition. It is our only home because we're all born on the Earth. It's important to love our Mother Earth.

I'll start with small things to live a green life. I'll eat up all my food at school and never waste food.

At home, I'll use LED lights instead of incandescent lamps(白炽灯). What's more, I'll plant some trees in the park next spring.

Living a green life is not hard. Your small actions can also help the Earth in a big way! Let's work together for the Earth and our future!

答案:Live a green life
Living a green life is an active commitment we make to our planet, starting with our daily decisions. Why do we need to live a green life? Due to all kinds of pollution and damage(破坏), the Earth is in poor condition. It is our only home because we're all born on the Earth. It's important to love our Mother Earth.
I'll start with small things to live a green life. I'll eat up all my food at school and never waste food. At home, I'll use LED lights instead of incandescent lamps(白炽灯). What's more, I'll plant some trees in the park next spring.
Living a green life is not hard. Your small actions can also help the Earth in a big way! Let's work together for the Earth and our future!
解析:
【分析】撰写该演讲稿需紧扣题目要求:开头已给出,首先要阐述“绿色生活”的意义(结合地球现状说明其重要性),接着列举日常可践行的具体措施,最后向同学们发出号召,语气要正式且亲切,符合演讲的语境,确保内容完整、词数达标。
【解析】1. 衔接开头阐述意义:点明地球因污染和破坏状况不佳,是人类唯一的家园,强调绿色生活的必要性,呼应开头的“对地球的承诺”;2. 列举具体措施:从日常小事切入,如不浪费食物、使用LED灯替代白炽灯、种树等,体现“从日常做起”的理念;3. 发出号召:强调个人小行动对地球的大作用,呼吁大家共同努力,增强演讲的感染力。
【答案】Live a green life
Living a green life is an active commitment we make to our planet, starting with our daily decisions. Why do we need to live a green life? Due to all kinds of pollution and damage, the Earth is in poor condition. It is our only home because we're all born on the Earth. It's important to love our Mother Earth.
I'll start with small things to live a green life. I'll eat up all my food at school and never waste food. At home, I'll use LED lights instead of incandescent lamps. What's more, I'll plant some trees in the park next spring.
Living a green life is not hard. Your small actions can also help the Earth in a big way! Let's work together for the Earth and our future!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、绿色生活话题表达
【点评】该演讲稿结构清晰,紧扣题目要求,涵盖了绿色生活的意义、具体措施和号召,语言通顺自然,符合演讲的语境,是一篇符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】0.5
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