零五网 全部参考答案 启东中学作业本 2026年启东中学作业本九年级英语上册译林版 第134页解析答案
(2026·江苏无锡一模)近年来,国家大力提倡美育,鼓励青少年走近艺术。为此,《21 世纪英文报》的 Workshop 写作专栏正在进行以“The art form that walks with me”为题的征文活动。请你根据流程图提示的要点,写一篇英文短文投稿。

【注意事项】
1. 短文要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意。
2. 词数不少于 90。
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
The art form that walks with me

Among all the art forms, painting is the one that has walked with me all these years. It opens my eyes to different cultures and ideas.

I like drawing flowers, animals and beautiful scenery. My favourite painter is Vincent van Gogh.

His famous work Sunflowers is very bright and beautiful. It tells me to love life.

Painting has influenced me a lot. It makes me patient and careful.

When I feel tired or sad, I draw pictures.

It also makes me happy.

Painting is not just a hobby, but a friend that makes me a better person.




答案:One possible version
The art form that walks with me
Among all the art forms, painting is the one that has walked with me all these years. It opens my eyes to different cultures and ideas.
I like drawing flowers, animals and beautiful scenery. My favourite painter is Vincent van Gogh. His famous work Sunflowers is very bright and beautiful. It tells me to love life.
Painting has influenced me a lot. It makes me patient and careful. When I feel tired or sad, I draw pictures. It also makes me happy. Painting is not just a hobby, but a friend that makes me a better person.
解析:
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“The art form that walks with me”为题,根据流程图的三个要点(最喜欢的艺术形式及原因、著名/特别的艺术作品/艺术家及特点、对自己的影响)写英文短文,需语句通顺、意思连贯,词数不少于90,不能用真实个人或学校信息。解题思路为:第一步确定最喜欢的艺术形式(如绘画)并说明喜欢的原因;第二步选择合适的艺术家/作品,介绍其特点和出名的缘由;第三步阐述该艺术形式对自己的影响,确保内容紧扣要点,结构清晰。
【解析】
1. 开头点明主题,说明最喜欢的艺术形式是绘画,引出其对自己的意义;
2. 中间部分介绍自己绘画的内容,选取著名画家梵高及其作品《向日葵》,说明作品的特点和传达的情感;
3. 结尾阐述绘画对自己的具体影响,如培养耐心、调节情绪,点明绘画是陪伴自己的朋友,升华主题。
【答案】
The art form that walks with me
Among all the art forms, painting is the one that has walked with me all these years. It opens my eyes to different cultures and ideas.
I like drawing flowers, animals and beautiful scenery. My favourite painter is Vincent van Gogh. His famous work Sunflowers is very bright and beautiful. It tells me to love life.
Painting has influenced me a lot. It makes me patient and careful. When I feel tired or sad, I draw pictures. It also makes me happy. Painting is not just a hobby, but a friend that makes me a better person.
【知识点】
英语写作、要点式写作、应用文写作
【点评】
短文紧扣流程图所有要点,结构清晰,内容连贯,语言流畅自然,准确表达了主题,词数符合要求,未使用真实个人或学校信息,是一篇符合征文要求的优秀作品。
【难度系数】
0.3
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