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六、书面表达(满分20分)
某英文报刊以“Colourful summer vacation”为主题向广大初中生征稿。假设你是李明,请你以“Three things to do for summer vacation”为题目,根据以下思维导图和要求用英语写一篇短文投稿。

【要求】
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3. 词数80—120。
Three things to do for summer vacation







答案:One possible version
Three things to do for summer vacation
With the temperature rising, a colourful vacation is around the corner. Three things come into my mind when I am making a list.
On the top of the list is a self-improvement plan, which includes reading books, watching movies and writing diaries. Besides, I also plan to build my body to keep a good shape and stay lively. I'll invite some classmates to go to the gym together and keep a daily record. The last thing is to relax with friends. It's a nice chance to meet some friends who I haven't seen for a long time because of my busy study.
In a word, I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
解析:
【分析】
写作时需围绕题目“Three things to do for summer vacation”,结合思维导图给出的三个核心要点(自我提升、体重管理、娱乐交友)展开。首先开头引出暑假计划,中间分三点具体阐述每一点的具体做法,结尾总结表达对假期的期待。需注意语句通顺、语法正确,词数控制在80-120,避免出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】
先点明暑假即将到来,引出要分享的三个暑假计划;接着分别说明:第一,自我提升计划,包含读书、看电影、写日记等;第二,健身保持良好体型,和同学一起去健身房;第三,和久未见面的朋友放松相聚;最后总结表达对假期的期待,完成短文写作。
【答案】
Three things to do for summer vacation
With the temperature rising, a colourful vacation is around the corner. Three things come into my mind when I am making a list.
On the top of the list is a self-improvement plan, which includes reading books, watching movies and writing diaries. Besides, I also plan to build my body to keep a good shape and stay lively. I'll invite some classmates to go to the gym together and keep a daily record. The last thing is to relax with friends. It's a nice chance to meet some friends who I haven't seen for a long time because of my busy study.
In a word, I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、思维导图应用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,完整覆盖思维导图的三个要点,语言流畅自然,符合初中生的英语写作要求,满足题目的各项规范。
【难度系数】
0.7
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