六、书面表达(满分20分)
学校英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。

【要求】
1. 根据思维导图提示,适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 词数80左右。
Enjoy reading
Reading opens up a wonderful world for me.
I read for pleasure and knowledge. Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.
I enjoy reading storybooks and science fiction the most. Storybooks let me experience different lives, while science fiction takes me to amazing future worlds.
To improve my reading, I use some good ways. I take notes about new words and interesting ideas. I also draw mind maps to understand the stories better. Discussing books with friends helps me a lot too.
答案:One possible version
Enjoy reading
Reading opens up a wonderful world for me. I read for pleasure and knowledge. Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.
I enjoy reading storybooks and science fiction the most. Storybooks let me experience different lives, while science fiction takes me to amazing future worlds.
To improve my reading, I use some good ways. I take notes about new words and interesting ideas. I also draw mind maps to understand the stories better. Discussing books with friends helps me a lot too.
解析:
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“畅享阅读”,需围绕思维导图的三个核心问题展开:一是说明喜欢阅读的原因(如获得快乐、知识等);二是介绍阅读的书籍类型(如故事书、科学类书籍等);三是阐述提升阅读的方法(如记笔记、画思维导图等)。写作时要适当补充细节,控制词数在80左右,避免出现真实姓名和校名,确保语言通顺连贯。
【解析】第一步,承接给定开头,说明阅读的原因,结合提示的“happiness、knowledge”补充细节,如“读精彩故事让我开心放松”;第二步,介绍阅读的书籍类型,对应“storybooks、science books”,补充故事书和科幻书的作用;第三步,说明提升阅读的方法,对应“take notes、draw mind maps”,可适当补充和朋友讨论的细节,确保内容完整符合要求。
【答案】One possible version
Enjoy reading
Reading opens up a wonderful world for me. I read for pleasure and knowledge. Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.
I enjoy reading storybooks and science fiction the most. Storybooks let me experience different lives, while science fiction takes me to amazing future worlds.
To improve my reading, I use some good ways. I take notes about new words and interesting ideas. I also draw mind maps to understand the stories better. Discussing books with friends helps me a lot too.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】本题为话题作文,要求结合思维导图信息完成短文,考查学生的英语语言组织与表达能力,内容贴近学生生活,要点清晰,易于学生发挥。
【难度系数】0.5