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六、书面表达(满分20分)(2026·江苏盐城建湖一模)
假如你是李华,你校英语社团将制作毕业纪念视频,现面向全体同学征询拍摄内容。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封邮件,分享你认为值得拍摄的内容。

【要求】
1. 文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等信息。
2. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
3. 词数100左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear chairperson,
I’m writing to share my ideas about what to record in the video.




I hope my ideas will be helpful. I’m looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:One possible version
Dear chairperson,
I'm writing to share my ideas about what to record in the video.
First, I think the video should include beautiful places in our school, such as the playground, the library, and classroom buildings. These places hold many sweet memories for us.
Second, it would be great to record some warm moments. Our teachers often explain questions patiently to us and look after us well when we feel uncomfortable. Our classmates are kind and helpful. We often learn together and help each other when in difficulties.
Finally, it's meaningful to invite our teachers and parents to express wishes for everyone's bright future in the video. I think every student will be surprised and happy.
I hope my ideas will be helpful. I'm looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份给英语社团主席写邮件,分享毕业纪念视频的拍摄内容。需紧扣思维导图的两个核心要点:美丽的校园场所(如操场、图书馆等)、温暖的互助时刻(如同学互助、老师关心等),还需补充合理的第三点内容(如师生或家长的祝福)。写作时要遵循邮件格式,开头结尾已给出,中间部分分点阐述,确保涵盖所有要点,适当发挥使内容连贯,词数符合要求,且不出现真实校名、人名。
【解析】
首先,围绕思维导图的要点组织内容:第一部分对应“美丽的地方”,列举操场、图书馆等校园场所,说明这些地方承载着学生的美好回忆;第二部分对应“温暖的时刻”,描述老师耐心答疑、同学互助的暖心场景;第三部分补充合理内容,即邀请老师和家长为学生送上毕业祝福,丰富视频意义。然后用规范的英语表达串联内容,确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯,符合词数要求,不违反题目规定。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear chairperson,
I'm writing to share my ideas about what to record in the video.
First, I think the video should include beautiful places in our school, such as the playground, the library, and classroom buildings. These places hold many sweet memories for us.
Second, it would be great to record some warm moments. Our teachers often explain questions patiently to us and look after us well when we feel uncomfortable. Our classmates are kind and helpful. We often learn together and help each other when in difficulties.
Finally, it's meaningful to invite our teachers and parents to express wishes for everyone's bright future in the video. I think every student will be surprised and happy.
I hope my ideas will be helpful. I'm looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达,邮件写作,要点整合
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力,题型贴近学生校园生活,要点清晰明确,要求学生整合给定信息并适当拓展,符合初中英语写作的考查方向,能有效检验学生的语言组织与运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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