八、书面表达
你校的英文报正在举行以“My best friend”为主题的征文比赛。请根据表格中的要点提示写一篇70词左右的短文。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。

My best friend
is my best friend.
答案:Sample writing:
My best friend
Sandy is my best friend. She is a tall and polite girl with lovely eyes. She likes wearing comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts, and they look cool on her.
Sandy has a healthy diet. She never goes to school without breakfast. She likes eating vegetables, fruit, fish and chicken. She thinks they are good for her health.
Running is Sandy’s favourite sport. It helps her stay healthy and happy. Sandy likes to make friends. She can listen to others carefully and help them with their problems.
This is my best friend. I’m happy to be with her.
解析:
【分析】本题为以“My best friend”为主题的英语书面表达题,需结合表格中的要点提示完成短文。解题思路:1. 确定朋友的名字,补充已给出的开头;2. 围绕“外貌与性格”,描述身高、外貌特征及性格特点;3. 结合“穿着”,说明喜欢的舒适衣物;4. 根据“饮食”,介绍健康的饮食习惯;5. 结合“爱好”,描述爱好及相关特点;6. 组织语言,使短文通顺连贯,涵盖所有要点,符合词数要求。
【解析】按照思路,将各要点串联成通顺的短文,运用正确的英语句式,确保内容完整、语言流畅,符合题目要求。
【答案】My best friend
Sandy is my best friend. She is a tall and polite girl with lovely eyes. She likes wearing comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts, and they look cool on her.
Sandy has a healthy diet. She never goes to school without breakfast. She likes eating vegetables, fruit, fish and chicken. She thinks they are good for her health.
Running is Sandy’s favourite sport. It helps her stay healthy and happy. Sandy likes to make friends. She can listen to others carefully and help them with their problems.
This is my best friend. I’m happy to be with her.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍、词汇运用
【点评】本题考查学生根据提示进行人物介绍的书面表达能力,要求学生准确运用相关词汇和句式,涵盖所有要点,语言通顺,是基础类书面表达题,能考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6