九、书面表达。
露西是一名六年级的学生,请根据下面的任务清单发挥想象,写一篇短文,谈谈她将要怎样做,以帮助保持城市干净整洁。
要求:1. 语句通顺,书写美观;2. 不少于5句话,可适当补充;3. 注意单词拼写、字母大小写等。

Lucy is a Grade 6 student. She will do a lot to help keep the city clean.
When she is in the park,
she will pick up rubbish on the ground
.
She will also put rubbish in the bin. She will put bikes in order too.
.
When she is on the street,
she will sweep the street and clean the benches
.
She will also make a colourful poster to ask others to keep the street clean and tidy
.
.
These small efforts will help make our city nice and beautiful.
答案:参考范文:
Lucy is a Grade 6 student. She will do a lot to help keep the city clean.
When she is in the park, she will pick up rubbish on the ground. She will also put rubbish in the bin. She will put bikes in order too.
When she is on the street, she will sweep the street and clean the benches. She will also make a colourful poster to ask others to keep the street clean and tidy.
These small efforts will help make our city nice and beautiful.
解析:
【分析】
本题是六年级英语书面表达题,要求根据给定的“地点-任务”清单,写露西保持城市整洁的短文。解题思路:首先确定时态为一般将来时(描述将要做的事),然后将表格中公园、街道对应的任务,用通顺的英语句子组织起来,适当补充细节(如海报的目的),确保语句通顺、句数达标,符合六年级英语的表达要求。
【解析】
1. 确定时态:使用“主语+will+动词原形”的一般将来时结构,契合“将要做某事”的语境;
2. 处理公园场景:把表格中“In the park”的任务(捡垃圾、扔垃圾桶、整理自行车)转化为连贯句子,如“When she is in the park, she will pick up rubbish on the ground. She will also put rubbish in the bin. She will put bikes in order too.”;
3. 处理街道场景:把表格中“On the street”的任务(扫街、擦长椅、做海报)补充合理细节(如海报呼吁他人保持整洁),写成“When she is on the street, she will sweep the street and clean the benches. She will also make a colourful poster to ask others to keep the street clean and tidy.”;
4. 连接内容并收尾,确保总句数不少于5句,符合题目要求。
【答案】
Lucy is a Grade 6 student. She will do a lot to help keep the city clean.
When she is in the park, she will pick up rubbish on the ground. She will also put rubbish in the bin. She will put bikes in order too.
When she is on the street, she will sweep the street and clean the benches. She will also make a colourful poster to ask others to keep the street clean and tidy.
These small efforts will help make our city nice and beautiful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达,一般将来时,情景写作
【点评】
本题结合生活实际,考查学生运用一般将来时进行情景写作的能力,给定的任务清单降低了写作难度,贴近学生生活,适合六年级学生巩固相关语法与写作技巧。
【难度系数】
0.5