二、微写作
了解了桑迪学习书法的经历后,你是否想到了你学习某种艺术形式的经历?或是想到了学习这种艺术可以给人们带来的好处?请用几句话简单谈谈。
My love of playing the piano began when I was 10 years old. At first, the notes were hard to remember and my fingers didn’t move well. There were times I wanted to give up. But with my teacher’s help, I kept practising and gradually, I could play smoothly.
Now playing the piano is my favourite way to relax. It not only brings me joy, but also teaches me to be patient and focused. It really makes my life more colourful and meaningful.
答案:Sample writing:
My love of playing the piano began when I was 10 years old. At first, the notes were hard to remember and my fingers didn’t move well. There were times I wanted to give up. But with my teacher’s help, I kept practising and gradually, I could play smoothly.
Now playing the piano is my favourite way to relax. It not only brings me joy, but also teaches me to be patient and focused. It really makes my life more colourful and meaningful.
解析:
【分析】本题要求结合自身学习某种艺术形式的经历,或阐述学习艺术的好处,用简洁的语句表达。解题思路:先选定一种熟悉的艺术形式(如钢琴),再叙述学习该艺术的经历(如初期困难、坚持过程),最后说明学习带来的益处,语言需通顺自然,符合微写作的简洁要求。
【解析】选取学习钢琴的经历,先描述初期学习的困难(记不住音符、手指不灵活),提及曾想放弃,后在老师帮助下坚持练习并熟练;再说明钢琴带来的好处,如放松身心、培养耐心专注,丰富生活。
【答案】My love of playing the piano began when I was 10 years old. At first, the notes were hard to remember and my fingers didn’t move well. There were times I wanted to give up. But with my teacher’s help, I kept practising and gradually, I could play smoothly. Now playing the piano is my favourite way to relax. It not only brings me joy, but also teaches me to be patient and focused. It really makes my life more colourful and meaningful.
【知识点】英语微写作;艺术学习经历表达
【点评】本题考查学生的叙事表达与感悟能力,要求结合自身实际,语言简洁流畅,情感真实,符合微写作的命题要求。
【难度系数】0.6