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三、书面表达
人生如旅途,既有晴空万里,亦有狂风暴雨。那些横亘前路的坎坷,看似阻碍前行,实则是浇灌成功之花的养分。直面困境的勇气与步履不停的坚持,终将照亮成长的漫漫长路。请以 “Difficulty leads to success” 为题,写一篇90词左右的文章,介绍一次自己克服某种困难并获得成功的经历。
Difficulty leads to success






答案:Sample writing:
Difficulty leads to success
I used to have trouble with English writing. I couldn’t organize ideas clearly and often made grammar mistakes. My scores were always low and it made me worried. I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to read short English passages every day and copy good sentences. I also practised writing a short paragraph daily. Whenever I met problems, I turned to my teacher or classmates.
After three months, my writing improved a lot. I did better in exams. This experience shows that hard work and the spirit of never giving up are always key to success.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以“Difficulty leads to success”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,需介绍自己克服困难并获得成功的经历。解题思路:1. 选取具体的个人困难(如英语写作困难);2. 描述困难的具体表现;3. 说明克服困难的方法;4. 阐述克服后的结果;5. 点明主题,呼应题目。
【解析】首先点明自己曾在英语写作上遇到困难(无法清晰组织思路、常犯语法错误、分数低);接着说明向老师求助,老师建议每天读短文、抄好句,自己坚持每天写段落,遇到问题向老师或同学请教;然后写三个月后写作进步,考试表现变好;最后总结经历,点明努力和坚持是成功的关键,紧扣“Difficulty leads to success”的主题,词数符合要求。
【答案】Sample writing:
Difficulty leads to success
I used to have trouble with English writing. I couldn’t organize ideas clearly and often made grammar mistakes. My scores were always low and it made me worried. I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to read short English passages every day and copy good sentences. I also practised writing a short paragraph daily. Whenever I met problems, I turned to my teacher or classmates.
After three months, my writing improved a lot. I did better in exams. This experience shows that hard work and the spirit of never giving up are always key to success.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作、主题呼应
【点评】范文紧扣题目主题,通过个人真实经历展开,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁,符合90词左右的要求,很好地诠释了“困难通向成功”的内涵,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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