八、书面表达
你学校的官方英文网站邀请每位同学写一封“给未来自己的信”，并计划在三年后，将这颗属于该学生的“时光胶囊”重新送回他/她手中。假设你是初三学生李华，你计划写一封不少于90词的信，其中包括以下几点内容：
1. 描述一个你当前正在面对的学习或成长的烦恼；
2. 分享一个给过你激励的人物；
3. 说明你计划如何克服困难，并朝着理想努力。
A letter to my future self
Dear “Future Me”,
I’m writing to send a gentle hello across the years. How are you? Right now,
I’m falling behind in some of my classes. Homework makes me feel a little bit stressed. Subjects like Physics and Maths are really challenging. Sometimes I stay in low spirits for quite a few days.
However, I find encouragement from Stephen Hawking, who made great achievements and faced his difficulties bravely. He stayed positive in his life. His story of overcoming great difficulties teaches me that I should not give up.
Therefore, I’ve decided to face this challenge. I will make a plan to help me improve. I’m going to study a little bit every day, practise more and carry on. I believe every small step counts.
I hope you are living your dream. Keep going!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：Sample writing:
A letter to my future self
Dear “Future Me”,
I’m writing to send a gentle hello across the years. How are you? Right now, I’m falling behind in some of my classes. Homework makes me feel a little bit stressed. Subjects like Physics and Maths are really challenging. Sometimes I stay in low spirits for quite a few days.
However, I find encouragement from Stephen Hawking, who made great achievements and faced his difficulties bravely. He stayed positive in his life. His story of overcoming great difficulties teaches me that I should not give up.
Therefore, I’ve decided to face this challenge. I will make a plan to help me improve. I’m going to study a little bit every day, practise more and carry on. I believe every small step counts.
I hope you are living your dream. Keep going!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以初三学生李华的身份写一封“给未来自己的信”，需包含三个核心内容：一是当前面临的学习或成长烦恼，二是给予自己激励的人物，三是克服困难、追逐理想的计划。解题时需紧扣要点，采用书信格式，语言符合初三学生水平，确保内容连贯、情感真实，字数不少于90词。
【解析】首先沿用给定的书信开头，第一部分描述具体烦恼：选取学业上物理、数学吃力，作业带来压力，情绪低落等内容；第二部分分享激励人物，如霍金，简述其克服困难取得成就的事迹，说明其带来的鼓励；第三部分说明克服计划，如制定学习计划、每日积累、多练习等，体现积极向上的态度，最后以给定的结尾收尾，确保结构完整、要点齐全。
【答案】A letter to my future self
Dear “Future Me”,
I’m writing to send a gentle hello across the years. How are you? Right now, I’m falling behind in some of my classes. Homework makes me feel a little bit stressed. Subjects like Physics and Maths are really challenging. Sometimes I stay in low spirits for quite a few days.
However, I find encouragement from Stephen Hawking, who made great achievements and faced his difficulties bravely. He stayed positive in his life. His story of overcoming great difficulties teaches me that I should not give up.
Therefore, I’ve decided to face this challenge. I will make a plan to help me improve. I’m going to study a little bit every day, practise more and carry on. I believe every small step counts.
I hope you are living your dream. Keep going!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、英语话题作文、英语表达个人经历与计划
【点评】范文严格围绕题目要求的三个要点展开，内容具体充实，符合初三学生的身份与视角，书信格式规范，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，很好地完成了写作任务，达到了题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】0.6
