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写作任务
假设你是李华,下面是你和你的朋友 Peter 生日的相关信息,请你根据下面的表格写一篇文章介绍你们两人的生日及庆祝情况。

写作要求:
1. 包含所给内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于 60 词;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I'm Li Hua. My birthday is on 1st October.
On that day, I usually eat noodles. They are a symbol of long life. Every year, my family and I take photos.

After that we watch a film together. It's happy to spend time with my family.

Next year, I want to go hiking with my family.

My good friend is Peter. His birthday is on 10th July.

On his birthday, he has birthday cakes and gets some gifts.

His family usually has a party for him. That makes him really happy.

Next year, he wants to learn to make a cake for his birthday.

答案:I'm Li Hua. My birthday is on 1st October. On that day, I usually eat noodles. They are a symbol of long life. Every year, my family and I take photos. After that we watch a film together. It's happy to spend time with my family. Next year, I want to go hiking with my family.
My good friend is Peter. His birthday is on 10th July. On his birthday, he has birthday cakes and gets some gifts. His family usually has a party for him. That makes him really happy. Next year, he wants to learn to make a cake for his birthday.
解析:
【分析】首先,开头已给出,需先围绕自己(李华)的生日信息展开:表格中李华的生日是10月1日,当天要做的事有吃面条、拍照、看电影,愿望是去徒步,需将这些内容用通顺的句子连接,适当补充细节让内容更饱满;接着介绍朋友Peter的生日(7月10日),他的活动是吃蛋糕、收礼物、开派对,愿望是做蛋糕,同样用连贯语句呈现,确保包含所有给定内容,满足字数要求。
【解析】先承接开头,写自己生日的具体安排:On that day, I usually eat noodles. They are a symbol of long life. Every year, my family and I take photos. After that we watch a film together. It's happy to spend time with my family. Next year, I want to go hiking with my family. 再介绍Peter的情况:My good friend is Peter. His birthday is on 10th July. On his birthday, he has birthday cakes and gets some gifts. His family usually has a party for him. That makes him really happy. Next year, he wants to learn to make a cake for his birthday. 整合所有表格信息,语句通顺,符合写作要求。
【答案】I'm Li Hua. My birthday is on 1st October. On that day, I usually eat noodles. They are a symbol of long life. Every year, my family and I take photos. After that we watch a film together. It's happy to spend time with my family. Next year, I want to go hiking with my family.
My good friend is Peter. His birthday is on 10th July. On his birthday, he has birthday cakes and gets some gifts. His family usually has a party for him. That makes him really happy. Next year, he wants to learn to make a cake for his birthday.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、信息整合、语句连贯
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,完整包含了表格中两人的生日时间、当天活动及愿望,适当补充细节丰富内容,语句通顺自然,符合不少于60词的要求,是一篇合格的写作范文。
【难度系数】0.3
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