写作任务
假如你是付兴,你的好朋友埃玛刚刚到一个新学校,下面是她发给你的一封邮件,请你根据邮件内容给她回复。
写作要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请回复邮件中所提及的所有问题,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Emma,
I am so glad to receive your email.
Yours,
Fu Xing
答案:参考范文:
Dear Emma,
I'm so glad to receive your email, and I understand your worry. It's common for friends to have different personalities, and it is good for your friendship. Let me introduce my two friends to you.
Li Lei is like me. We are quiet and both love reading. I like history books, but he loves novels. We share books and know each other well.
Wang Gang is quite different from me. He is outgoing and funny. Because of him, I'm not so shy as before. He will tell me my mistakes directly, and I am thankful for his honesty.
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It is not important whether you are the same or different. We need to respect each other's differences. Just be yourself, and you will make good friends soon.
Yours,
Fu Xing
解析:
【分析】
本次写作任务是回复Emma的邮件,需先安抚她的不安,再覆盖她提出的三个核心问题:自己与朋友是相似还是不同、如何成为朋友、分享朋友的相关经历,最后给出合理建议,注意词数80左右,符合邮件格式,不出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
1. 开头:回应Emma的担忧,点明友谊中异同均属正常,缓解她的焦虑情绪;
2. 主体:选取两个朋友的例子,一个与自己性格爱好相似,一个与自己性格互补,分别说明成为朋友的原因,完整回答Emma的问题;
3. 结尾:引用关于友谊的名言,鼓励Emma做自己,传递积极态度,使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Emma,
I'm so glad to receive your email, and I understand your worry. It's common for friends to have different personalities, and it is good for your friendship. Let me introduce my two friends to you.
Li Lei is like me. We are quiet and both love reading. I like history books, but he loves novels. We share books and know each other well.
Wang Gang is quite different from me. He is outgoing and funny. Because of him, I'm not so shy as before. A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It is not important whether you are the same or different. Just be yourself, and you will make good friends soon.
Yours,
Fu Xing
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、友谊话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,完整回应了邮件中的所有问题,例子具体生动,观点积极明确,符合初中英语写作的格式与词数要求,语言流畅自然。
【难度系数】
0.4