十二、书面表达。(共5分)
假如你是王兵,昨天(10月21日)是你妈妈40岁生日。请写一篇小短文,介绍你们如何为妈妈庆祝生日。不少于6句话。
答案:One possible version:
Yesterday was 21st October. It was my mother's 40th birthday. My father and I gave her a big surprise. We bought a nice birthday cake and some beautiful flowers. I drew a picture for my mum and said "Happy Birthday" to her. We had a big dinner and ate the cake together. My mum was very happy. I love my mother very much.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以王兵的身份,围绕10月21日妈妈40岁生日的庆祝过程写作,需用一般过去时,不少于6句话。解题思路:先点明时间与事件,再梳理庆祝的具体环节(准备的礼物、共同活动等),最后体现妈妈的感受与情感,确保内容贴合情境、语句通顺。
【解析】
以王兵的身份,用一般过去时叙述:先说明昨天是10月21日,是妈妈40岁生日;接着介绍和爸爸为妈妈准备的惊喜(买蛋糕、花,自己画画);再写一起吃晚餐、吃蛋糕的过程;最后表达妈妈的开心与对妈妈的爱,满足不少于6句话的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:Yesterday was 21st October. It was my mother's 40th birthday. My father and I gave her a big surprise. We bought a nice birthday cake and some beautiful flowers. I drew a picture for my mum and said "Happy Birthday" to her. We had a big dinner and ate the cake together. My mum was very happy. I love my mother very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达,一般过去时,生日话题写作
【点评】
本题结合生活实际考查英语叙事写作,要求学生运用一般过去时描述事件,既考查基础语法运用,又考查内容组织能力,贴近学生生活,易于发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6