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七、阅读短文，回答问题（10分）
Huang Xuhua, a great Chinese scientist, is famous as "the Father of China's Nuclear Submarines (核潜艇)". He was born on March 12, 1926, in Guangdong. In his early years, China was in a mess. The Japanese army often made cruel attacks on Chinese cities, bringing great pain to the country. These hard times made Huang Xuhua decide to study shipbuilding to help China become stronger.
Building China's first nuclear submarines was a very challenging and secret project. For over 30 years, Huang missed important moments in his children's growth and couldn't celebrate festivals with his family. He felt sorry, but his sense of duty to the country always won out.
You couldn't imagine how poor the working conditions were. Huang and his team didn't have enough money, experience or guidance for nuclear submarines' study. Without computers, Huang and his team had to use abacuses (算盘). They faced many problems, but their hard work finally achieved great success. In 1970, China's first nuclear attack submarine, Changzheng 1, was ready for sea tests and started serving in 1974. This made China the fifth country to have such a powerful weapon (武器).
After 14 years, Huang, the 62-year-old man, joined the risky first deep-diving test of the submarine. Even when he was old, he often went to the research centre to share his knowledge with young people. His aged hands holding model submarines became the most moving lessons for young scientists. Huang's story teaches us to always follow our dreams and be willing to work hard for our country, no matter what difficulties we meet.
1. What is Huang Xuhua famous as?

"The Father of China's Nuclear Submarines".

2. Why couldn't Huang Xuhua celebrate festivals with his family for years?

To finish the challenging and secret project./To build China's first nuclear submarines.

3. What were Huang and his team short of when working on the project?

Money, experience, guidance and computers.

4. When did Huang join the risky first deep-diving test of the submarine?

In 1988./When he was 62 years old.

5. What can you learn from Huang Xuhua?

We should work hard for our country/We shouldn't fear difficulties.

答案：1. "The Father of China's Nuclear Submarines".
2. To finish the challenging and secret project./To build China's first nuclear submarines.
3. Money, experience, guidance and computers.
4. In 1988./When he was 62 years old.
5. We should work hard for our country/We shouldn't fear difficulties.

解析：

【分析】本题为人物传记类英语阅读理解简答题，解题思路是先通读全文，针对每个问题在原文中定位相关语句，提取关键信息，确保答案与原文内容一致，符合问题要求。具体步骤：1. 针对问题1，定位原文第一段第一句，提取人物称号；2. 针对问题2，定位第二段内容，分析黄旭华无法与家人过节的原因；3. 针对问题3，定位第三段，提取团队缺少的资源；4. 针对问题4，通过时间推算或原文直接信息找到对应时间；5. 针对问题5，定位最后一段，归纳从人物事迹中获得的启示。
【解析】1. 原文第一段明确提到Huang Xuhua is famous as "the Father of China's Nuclear Submarines"，直接提取该内容作答；2. 第二段指出建造中国第一艘核潜艇是极具挑战性的秘密项目，黄旭华因投入该项目无法陪伴家人，故原因是为完成该项目；3. 第三段提到Huang and his team didn't have enough money, experience or guidance... Without computers，故缺少的是钱、经验、指导和电脑；4. 原文提到1974年核潜艇服役，14年后（1974+14=1988），62岁的黄旭华参加深潜测试，故时间为1988年或62岁时；5. 最后一段提到Huang's story teaches us to work hard for our country, not fear difficulties等，据此归纳答案。
【答案】1. "The Father of China's Nuclear Submarines".
2. To finish the challenging and secret project./To build China's first nuclear submarines.
3. Money, experience, guidance and computers.
4. In 1988./When he was 62 years old.
5. We should work hard for our country/We shouldn't fear difficulties.
【知识点】英语阅读理解、信息定位、主旨归纳
【点评】本题围绕黄旭华的事迹展开，考查学生快速定位原文细节、归纳主旨的能力，属于基础类阅读理解题，需要学生仔细阅读短文，准确提取关键信息。
【难度系数】0.6

八、书面表达（30分）
生活中的一件点滴小事、一个平凡之人、一个简单的习惯……都会帮助我们成为更优秀的自己。请以“

Reading

Help(s) Me Grow up Better”为题，根据以下提示内容用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，讲述帮助你成长的一件事、一个人或者一个习惯。
提示：1. What/Who helps you grow up better?
2. Why do you think the thing/the person helps you grow up better?
3. What have you learned from the thing/the person?

Help(s) Me Grow up Better

答案：Reading Helps Me Grow up Better
Reading has influenced me a lot. I used to be too shy to talk with others and felt negative. My English teacher advised me to read more English books. I started with simple storybooks and soon fell in love with reading stories about brave heroes, kind friends and wonderful adventures.
Reading not only increases my knowledge but also shapes my personality. It lets me come up with new ideas and makes me more confident and outgoing. Now I can communicate with classmates well and express my thoughts bravely.
I believe reading is a lifelong journey. It will keep inspiring me to become a better person and tell me that hard work will finally pay off.

解析：

【分析】这是一道半开放性英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 补全题目，确定写作主题（如选择“Reading”）；2. 紧扣提示的三个核心要点构思内容：①明确帮助自己成长的对象；②说明该对象帮助自己成长的具体原因；③阐述从该对象中获得的感悟；3. 组织语言，确保词数约100词，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，符合英语写作规范。
【解析】写作步骤：①补全题目为“Reading Helps Me Grow up Better”；②开头点明阅读对自己的影响，介绍自身之前的状态（害羞、消极）及老师的建议；③中间部分阐述阅读的作用：增长知识、塑造性格，让自己变得更自信外向，善于与同学交流；④结尾总结阅读的意义，表达其对未来成长的启发。写作时需注意用词准确，语句通顺，严格贴合提示要求，控制词数。
【答案】Reading Helps Me Grow up Better
Reading has influenced me a lot. I used to be too shy to talk with others and felt negative. My English teacher advised me to read more English books. I started with simple storybooks and soon fell in love with reading stories about brave heroes, kind friends and wonderful adventures.
Reading not only increases my knowledge but also shapes my personality. It lets me come up with new ideas and makes me more confident and outgoing. Now I can communicate with classmates well and express my thoughts bravely.
I believe reading is a lifelong journey. It will keep inspiring me to become a better person and tell me that hard work will finally pay off.
【知识点】英语书面表达、半开放命题作文
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，严格遵循提示的三个要点展开，语言流畅自然，内容真实具体，清晰展现了阅读对个人成长的帮助，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6