八、书面表达(30分)
假如你是李华,你的绘画作品在学校举办的文化节评选中获奖。美国笔友埃迪对你的作品很感兴趣,请你给他写一封100词左右的电子邮件,介绍你的作品风格、使用的工具、蕴含的元素(花卉/山水/动物/图形等)以及你想传达的美好理念。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eddie,
I'm so glad that you're interested in my painting at the School Cultural Festival.
I take great pleasure in painting. I hope you can feel the beauty in my work.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:My work is created in the traditional Chinese painting style. I used special painting brushes, ink and paper to finish it, which are classic tools for this art form. In the painting, there is a green tree and some lovely birds resting on its branches. In addition, I added running water beside the tree to make the whole picture lively.
These natural scenes carry special meanings. I hope to show the peaceful beauty of nature and tell people to value our natural environment. Living in peace with nature brings us joy, and that's the main idea I want to share through this painting.
解析:
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份给美国笔友埃迪写邮件介绍获奖绘画作品,需涵盖作品风格、使用工具、画面元素、传达理念四个核心内容,衔接已给的开头和结尾,语言要亲切自然,符合英语书信表达习惯,控制词数在100词左右。
【解析】写作时,先点明作品风格为传统中国画;接着说明创作工具是该艺术形式的经典工具(毛笔、墨、宣纸);再介绍画面元素:绿树、枝头飞鸟、旁侧流水;最后阐述传达的理念:展现自然的宁静之美,呼吁人们珍惜自然、与自然和谐共处,确保内容完整贴合要求。
【答案】My work is created in the traditional Chinese painting style. I used special painting brushes, ink and paper to finish it, which are classic tools for this art form. In the painting, there is a green tree and some lovely birds resting on its branches. In addition, I added running water beside the tree to make the whole picture lively. These natural scenes carry special meanings. I hope to show the peaceful beauty of nature and tell people to value our natural environment. Living in peace with nature brings us joy, and that's the main idea I want to share through this painting.
【知识点】英语书信写作;书面表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求紧扣指定要点展开,语言通顺连贯,符合交际语境,能有效检验学生的英语综合运用水平。
【难度系数】0.6