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五、书面表达
假如你是张华,收到了校长室发来的学生意见调查表。请你认真阅读这份调查表,并结合自己的实际情况和想法,给校长室写一封100词左右的回信。

Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.

Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food.

My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well.

Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.




I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.

Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
答案:Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
解析:
【分析】
本题要求以张华的身份给校长室写一封回信,需结合调查表的三个核心问题(学校图书馆、食堂食物、老师学业帮助),并补充其他合理建议,属于英语应用文写作题。解题思路:① 开头点明写信目的(针对学校生活提建议);② 对应调查表问题,先肯定可取之处,再提出具体改进建议;③ 补充其他合理建议;④ 结尾表达希望建议有帮助,符合书信格式和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头:用“I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.”点明写信目的;
2. 对应调查表问题:① 图书馆:肯定其现代新,建议补充周刊、报纸等读物;② 食堂:肯定食物,建议增加本地食物;③ 老师:肯定老师的帮助,说明对学习的作用;
3. 补充其他建议:希望增设更多社团;
4. 结尾:表达希望建议有助于改善校园生活,符合书信格式。
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、校园话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕校园生活主题,考查学生结合实际撰写英语建议信的能力,贴近学生生活,要求掌握书信格式与建议类表达,易于学生发挥。
【难度系数】
0.5
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