五、书面表达
假如你是张华,收到了校长室发来的学生意见调查表。请你认真阅读这份调查表,并结合自己的实际情况和想法,给校长室写一封100词左右的回信。

Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
答案:Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以张华的身份给校长室写回信,回应学生意见调查表的内容。解题思路:首先明确书信的格式(开头称呼、结尾署名);其次对应调查表的三个问题(学校图书馆、食堂食物、老师的帮助),结合自身实际给出合理建议;最后补充其他合理建议,控制字数在100词左右,确保语言通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 开头点明写信目的:说明写信是为了提出改善学校生活的建议;
2. 回应图书馆:肯定图书馆的优点,建议增加周刊、报纸等阅读材料;
3. 回应食堂:表达对食堂食物的喜爱,建议增加本地食物;
4. 回应老师:感谢老师的帮助,说明老师对自己学习的支持;
5. 补充其他建议:希望增加更多社团供学生选择;
6. 结尾表达希望建议能帮助改善学校生活,完成书信。
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、应用文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求结合校园实际提出合理建议,既考查语言运用能力,又考查逻辑思维能力,贴近学生生活实际,符合课标要求。
【难度系数】
0.5