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五、书面表达
在成长的道路上,每个学生都会遇到困难。请你根据要点提示,以“How to Face Trouble in Life”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,分享你曾经遇到的困难、应对方法以及感受。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要点提示:1. What is your trouble?
2. How did you get through it?
3. What have you learned from it?
How to Face Troubles in Life
As we grow, there are lots of troubles we have to face and solve properly. Today I'd like to share one of mine with you.








答案:How to Face Troubles in Life
As we grow, there are lots of troubles we have to face and solve properly. Today I' like to share one of mine with you.
When I was in Grade 7, I failed to pass my English speech competition. I fe disappointed and wondered what to do. I asked my English teacher for help, and sh advised me to watch speeches by famous people and learn about their stories. Shortly afte that, I was inspired by their strong will. I kept practising hard every day and made a lot of progress. In the end, I made it and was highly praised in the following competition.
Just as the saying goes, "Where there's a will, there's a way." However difficult it is, what matters is that you never give up. Whenever I meet trouble, I will remember this experience. Trouble helps us become a better self.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语话题类书面表达题,要求围绕“如何面对生活中的困难”展开,需覆盖三个要点:具体遇到的困难、应对方法、从中获得的感悟。解题思路为:1. 选取贴近学生生活的具体困难(如学习或竞赛失利),用过去时态清晰描述;2. 写出合理的应对措施,体现解决问题的过程;3. 升华主题,点明从困难中获得的成长与感悟,注意词数控制在100词左右,语言通顺连贯,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 点明困难:When I was in Grade 7, I failed to pass my English speech competition. I felt disappointed and wondered what to do.
2. 描述应对方法:I asked my English teacher for help, and she advised me to watch speeches by famous people and learn about their stories. Inspired by their strong will, I kept practicing hard every day and made great progress. Finally, I succeeded and was highly praised in the next competition.
3. 表达感悟:Just as the saying goes, "Where there's a will, there's a way." No matter how hard the trouble is, the key is never to give up. This experience teaches me that trouble helps us become a better self.
(结合已给开头补充上述内容即可完成短文)
【答案】
How to Face Troubles in Life
As we grow, there are lots of troubles we have to face and solve properly. Today I'd like to share one of mine with you.
When I was in Grade 7, I failed to pass my English speech competition. I felt disappointed and wondered what to do. I asked my English teacher for help, and she advised me to watch speeches by famous people and learn about their stories. Shortly after that, I was inspired by their strong will. I kept practising hard every day and made a lot of progress. In the end, I made it and was highly praised in the following competition.
Just as the saying goes, "Where there's a will, there's a way." However difficult it is, what matters is that you never give up. Whenever I meet trouble, I will remember this experience. Trouble helps us become a better self.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题,完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点,叙事条理清晰,语言流畅自然,感悟深刻,符合初中英语写作的规范要求,是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
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