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八、(2025·泰州市姜堰区期中)书面表达。(共 10 分)
阳光中学八年级(1)班就同学们喜欢的旅游方式进行了调查,并将调查结果整理成一张表格。请根据表格内容,向你的美国朋友介绍近年来同学们旅游方式的变化。

· Talk with others
· Smell flowers in spring
· Save time and cost little money
· Enjoy digital(电子的) museums
· · · |
要求:
1. 短文应包含表格中所列要点;
2. 结构完整、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于 100;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。

答案:One possible version:
Changes in students' travel ways in Sunshine Middle School
Recently, a survey about students' favourite travel ways was carried out in Class 1, Grade 8 of Sunshine Middle School. Great changes have taken place over the years.
In the past, offline travel was the main choice. Students loved it because they could touch things with their hands, talk with others face to face, and smell flowers in spring. It made them feel the real world directly.
But now, online travel is becoming more and more popular. There are several reasons. First, it allows students to "go" anywhere they want, which saves a lot of time. Also, it costs little money. What's more, they can enjoy digital museums, getting knowledge in a new and interesting way.
These changes show that students' travel habits are adapting to the development of the times.
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道书面表达题,第一步先审题:明确写作核心是向外国朋友介绍阳光中学八年级1班学生旅游方式的今昔变化,需要完整覆盖表格里所有给出的要点,词数不少于100,不能出现真实人名校名。第二步搭建行文逻辑:开头先引出本次调查的背景,直接点出旅游方式发生了很大变化;中间分两个板块分别介绍过去的线下旅行和当下的线上旅行,对应填入表格给出的所有理由,补充少量合理细节让内容更饱满;最后用简短的句子升华主题,说明变化背后的意义。第三步要注意时态区分:描述过去的出行习惯用一般过去时,描述当下的流行趋势用一般现在时,保证时态准确,用合适的衔接词让语句流畅连贯。
【解析】
写作可以按照以下步骤完成:
1. 开篇引入:直接点明阳光中学八年级1班开展了关于最喜爱的旅游方式的调查,引出多年来学生的旅游方式发生了巨大变化的核心主题。
2. 介绍过去的出行特点:说明过去线下旅行是大家的主流选择,依次对应表格给出的理由:可以亲手触摸实物、和其他人面对面交流、在春日里嗅闻花香,补充说明这类出行能让大家直接感受到真实的世界,丰富内容。
3. 介绍当下的出行新趋势:说明现在线上旅行越来越受欢迎,逐一对应表格给出的优势:足不出户就能“前往”任意想去的地方,既节省时间又几乎不花费什么钱,还可以体验各类电子博物馆,以新颖有趣的方式获取知识。
4. 结尾升华:简单点明这类变化说明学生的出行习惯正在顺应时代的发展,让文章结构完整立意更饱满。
写作时注意不要遗漏任何表格给出的要点,控制总词数在100词以上,不要出现真实的个人信息和校名。
【答案】
Changes in students' travel ways in Sunshine Middle School
Recently, a survey about students' favourite travel ways was carried out in Class 1, Grade 8 of Sunshine Middle School. Great changes have taken place over the years.
In the past, offline travel was the main choice. Students loved it because they could touch things with their hands, talk with others face to face, and smell flowers in spring. It made them feel the real world directly.
But now, online travel is becoming more and more popular. There are several reasons. First, it allows students to "go" anywhere they want, which saves a lot of time. Also, it costs little money. What's more, they can enjoy digital museums, getting knowledge in a new and interesting way.
These changes show that students' travel habits are adapting to the development of the times.
【知识点】
今昔对比类写作,时态正确运用,要点整合表达
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了表格所有给定要点,今昔对比的逻辑清晰分明,时态使用准确,衔接词的使用让行文流畅自然,结尾的合理升华让文章内容更有深度,完全符合题目对词数、内容的全部要求,是一篇非常规范的八年级英语书面表达范文。同学们写同类主题作文时要注意区分不同时间对应的时态,不要遗漏提示的核心要点。
【难度系数】
0.65
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