五、书面表达。
寓言故事给我们带来很多启迪，其中《龟兔赛跑》的故事耐人寻味。请以“The rabbit and the tortoise”为题，根据下面的图片和要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：1. Describe the story "The rabbit and the tortoise".
2. Explain the influences(影响) that the story has on you.
注意：1. 必须包括所给要点，可适当拓展；2. 词数90左右；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
参考词汇：race 赛跑；winner 获胜者；discouraged 泄气的；go beyond 超越
The rabbit and the tortoise
One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. So they started at the same time. The rabbit thought he was sure to be the winner. But the tortoise was never discouraged and kept on moving forward as fast as he could. As the rabbit turned around, he found the tortoise far behind him. He decided to have a rest. Unluckily, he fell asleep and the tortoise went beyond him.
After reading this story, I have learnt a lot from the tortoise. I am not good at my studies. But I will never give up. Besides, the story also tells me I shouldn't look down on anyone else.
答案：五、One possible version:
The rabbit and the tortoise
One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. So they started at the same time. The rabbit thought he was sure to be the winner. But the tortoise was never discouraged and kept on moving forward as fast as he could. As the rabbit turned around, he found the tortoise far behind him. He decided to have a rest. Unluckily, he fell asleep and the tortoise went beyond him.
After reading this story, I have learnt a lot from the tortoise. I am not good at my studies. But I will never give up. Besides, the story also tells me I shouldn't look down on anyone else.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先明确两个必须完成的核心要点：第一要完整描述龟兔赛跑的经典故事，第二要写出这个故事给自己带来的影响。首先梳理叙事逻辑：按照故事发展顺序，先交代兔子和乌龟约定赛跑的背景，再写兔子自恃速度快中途休息睡觉，乌龟始终坚持前行，最终乌龟超越兔子的完整情节，对应给出的三张图片内容。之后结合自身的学习日常谈故事带来的启发，注意控制总词数在90左右，不要出现真实的个人相关信息，合理使用题目给出的参考词汇让表达更准确。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文属于故事叙述+感悟类的短文，讲述故事部分使用一般过去时，阐述自身感悟部分使用一般现在时，保证时态统一准确。
2. 搭建文章结构：
① 第一部分叙事：开篇交代赛跑的起因，说明双方约定的终点，接着写兔子认为自己必胜，跑远后停下休息睡着，乌龟始终不泄气坚持前进，最终超越兔子的完整情节，贴合图片内容。
② 第二部分谈影响：结合自身学习的实际情况，写出从故事中得到的启发，比如资质普通也不要放弃、不能轻视他人、不能骄傲懈怠等内容。
3. 最后通读检查：确认两个要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求，没有语法错误，也没有出现真实的人名校名等违规内容。
【答案】
The rabbit and the tortoise
One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. So they started at the same time. The rabbit thought he was sure to be the winner. But the tortoise was never discouraged and kept on moving forward as fast as he could. As the rabbit turned around, he found the tortoise far behind him. He decided to have a rest. Unluckily, he fell asleep and the tortoise went beyond him.
After reading this story, I have learnt a lot from the tortoise. I am not good at my studies. But I will never give up. Besides, the story also tells me I shouldn't look down on anyone else.
【知识点】
故事类书面表达，英语时态运用，记叙文写作
【点评】
这篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部要点，叙事逻辑连贯顺畅，精准还原了龟兔赛跑的经典情节，感悟部分贴合中学生的日常学习场景，内容真实不空洞，合理运用了题干给出的所有参考词汇，语法使用准确，词数符合题目要求，是一篇标准的优秀考场范文。同学们完成这类寓言类写作题时，要先理清故事的发展脉络，再结合自身实际谈感悟，避免内容脱离要点。
【难度系数】
0.6
