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五、书面表达。
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 David 对国画感兴趣。请你根据所给提示,向他介绍国画。
内容:1. 国画具有 2 000 多年的历史;2. 绘画工具:墨水、毛笔和纸张;展示山水、花鸟或人物;
3. 注重情感,国画让人感到宁静并有特殊的意义;4. 是表达文化、情感和自然的方式,强调人与自然的和谐;5. 个人感想。
注意:1. 要点齐全并拓展,文章通顺;2. 词数 80 左右;3. 文章中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇:emotion 情感;stress 强调;harmony 和谐
One possible version:

Chinese painting has a history of more than 2,000 years. It uses ink, brushes and paper. It often shows landscapes, flowers, birds or people.

Artists focus on feelings and ideas. The paintings can make people calm and have special meanings. Chinese painting expresses culture, nature and emotions in a different way. It stresses the harmony between man and nature.

I think if you understand Chinese painting, you will have a better understanding of Chinese people.


答案:五、One possible version:
Chinese painting has a history of more than 2,000 years. It uses ink, brushes and paper. It often shows landscapes, flowers, birds or people.
Artists focus on feelings and ideas. The paintings can make people calm and have special meanings. Chinese painting expresses culture, nature and emotions in a different way. It stresses the harmony between man and nature.
I think if you understand Chinese painting, you will have a better understanding of Chinese people.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题,首先第一步先明确写作身份是李华,写作对象是对国画感兴趣的英国好友David,核心写作任务是向对方介绍中国国画。接下来先把题干给出的所有5个要点逐一标记,避免遗漏,之后按照从浅到深的逻辑排布内容:先介绍国画的基础属性(历史时长、创作工具、常见题材),再介绍它的艺术特点和文化内核,最后补充个人感想,行文要符合给朋友介绍事物的轻松语气,用上题干给出的参考词汇,控制总词数在80左右,适当添加简单衔接让语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 确定写作框架:本文属于事物介绍类说明文,整体以一般现在时为主要时态,介绍国画部分用第三人称,表达个人感想部分用第一人称,符合写作要求。
2. 按逻辑排布内容:
① 开篇直接点明国画拥有2000多年的悠久历史;
② 接着介绍国画的创作工具为墨水、毛笔和纸张,常见的描绘内容包含山水、花鸟、人物;
③ 进一步说明国画注重情感表达,能让观者感到宁静,作品本身承载特殊意义;
④ 升华到文化层面:国画是传递文化、情感与自然的特殊方式,强调人与自然的和谐;
⑤ 最后补充个人感想,点明了解国画能帮助David更好地理解中国人与中国文化,贴合交际场景。
3. 串联语句,检查所有要点是否全覆盖,核对参考词汇emotion、stress、harmony的使用是否正确,调整语句长度把词数控制在要求范围内,规避语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
Chinese painting has a history of more than 2,000 years. It uses ink, brushes and paper. It often shows landscapes, flowers, birds or people.
Artists focus on feelings and ideas. The paintings can make people calm and have special meanings. Chinese painting expresses culture, nature and emotions in a different way. It stresses the harmony between man and nature.
I think if you understand Chinese painting, you will have a better understanding of Chinese people.
【知识点】
事物类说明文写作;中国文化英语表达;一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题是贴合文化输出场景的交际类书面表达,所有核心写作要点都已明确给出,学生只需要按照合理逻辑串联内容,适当补充简单衔接成分就能完成符合要求的文章,同时还能积累传统中国文化相关的英语表达,提升用英语介绍本土文化的能力,写作时注意不要遗漏题干给出的任意要点,控制词数即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
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