六、书面表达(满分20分)(2025·江苏无锡期中改编)
学校科技节期间,为了激励广大青少年向伟大的科学家们学习,英语俱乐部特举办征文活动,请参考以下内容提示,撰写一篇介绍杨振宁的短文,标题为“A great scientist—Yang Zhenning”。
【注意】
1. 征文内容须根据内容提示自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意。
2. 词数不少于90,短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A great scientist—Yang Zhenning
答案：One possible version
A great scientist—Yang Zhenning
Yang Zhenning was a great scientist who lived from 1922 to 2025. He was born in Anhui, China. When he was young, he became very interested in Maths and Science.
He once worked and taught in the USA for many years. In 2003, he decided to return to China. After that, he taught at Tsinghua University and helped train many young people there.
In 1957, he won the Nobel Prize in Physics. This brought great honour to China. I think he is a wonderful example for us to learn from. We should study hard and try to make our country stronger just as he did.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇人物介绍类英语书面表达，需围绕杨振宁的相关信息完成征文。写作思路为：先介绍杨振宁的基本信息（生卒、出生地、兴趣），再叙述他的经历，接着说明他的成就，最后加入个人感想，确保覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰、语句连贯，符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 开头介绍基本信息：点明杨振宁的身份、生卒年份、出生地及兴趣，对应表格内容；
2. 中间叙述经历：说明他在美国的工作教学经历，以及2003年回国的情况，补充合理细节使内容连贯；
3. 结尾说明成就与感想：提及1957年获诺贝尔物理学奖的成就，表达向他学习的意愿，升华主题；
4. 注意词数要求，语句通顺，无语法错误，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version
A great scientist—Yang Zhenning
Yang Zhenning was a great scientist who lived from 1922 to 2025. He was born in Anhui, China. When he was young, he became very interested in Maths and Science.
He once worked and taught in the USA for many years. In 2003, he decided to return to China. After that, he taught at Tsinghua University and helped train many young people there.
In 1957, he won the Nobel Prize in Physics. This brought great honour to China. I think he is a wonderful example for us to learn from. We should study hard and try to make our country stronger just as he did.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，加入的个人感想合理自然，符合书面表达的评分标准，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
