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五、书面表达
假如你是李婷,下面是你的个人小档案,请根据图片中的相关提示,写一篇70词左右(不含所给开头)的英文自我介绍。

Hi there! I am Li Ting.







This is me. Do you want to be my friend?
答案:Hi there! I am Li Ting. My English name is Susan. I'm thirteen years old. Now I study in Nanjing Sunshine Middle School.
I'm a little short but look very cute. I have big eyes, a small nose and long hair. I'm always shy and quiet. I don't like to talk much.
I like listening to music very much. Music always makes me happy. I also enjoy dancing. I'm very good at it. I want to be a dancer in the future.
This is me. Do you want to be my friend?
解析:
【分析】
本题要求以李婷的身份写英文自我介绍,需结合给定的个人档案信息(年龄、学校、外貌、性格、爱好、擅长领域),补充合理细节,完成70词左右的短文。解题思路:1. 沿用已给开头,依次介绍个人基本信息(年龄、学校);2. 描述外貌特征与性格;3. 说明爱好与擅长的内容;4. 结尾呼应题目要求,邀请对方做朋友,确保涵盖所有提示点,语言通顺,符合初中英语表达习惯。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 承接开头,介绍年龄:I'm thirteen years old.
2. 说明就读学校:Now I study in Nanjing Sunshine Middle School.
3. 描述外貌与性格:补充合理外貌细节(如big eyes),结合提示的long hair、shy,写出I have big eyes and long hair. I'm a little shy and quiet.
4. 介绍爱好与擅长:结合提示的listening to music,补充合理爱好(如dancing)及擅长内容,写出I like listening to music and dancing. I'm good at dancing.
5. 结尾呼应题目,邀请做朋友,形成完整短文,控制字数在要求范围内。
【答案】
Hi there! I am Li Ting. My English name is Susan. I'm thirteen years old. Now I study in Nanjing Sunshine Middle School.
I'm a little short but look very cute. I have big eyes, a small nose and long hair. I'm always shy and quiet. I don't like to talk much.
I like listening to music very much. Music always makes me happy. I also enjoy dancing. I'm very good at it. I want to be a dancer in the future.
This is me. Do you want to be my friend?
【知识点】
英语书面表达、个人介绍类写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题为基础书面表达题,贴近学生生活,考查学生根据提示信息组织语言的能力,要求涵盖给定的个人档案要点,补充合理细节,语言通顺即可,能有效锻炼学生的英语写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.5
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