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五、书面表达
为丰富校园文化生活,你校即将举办校园绘画艺术分享征文活动。现面向全体同学征集英文短文,分享你最喜爱的画家及其代表作品。请根据下方征文要求,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

My favourite painter is Pablo Picasso, a world-famous Spanish artist. Among all his works, the Three Musicians impresses me most. He used simple shapes to create faces in the painting. It makes the painting quite unusual.

Picasso achieved his dream through hard work and great courage. He showed great talent as a kid and received strict art training. Later, he kept trying new painting styles, never afraid of challenging old art ideas even when others doubted him.

From Picasso and his works, I learn that creativity matters most. We should stick to our own ideas and be brave to try new things.






答案:My favourite painter is Pablo Picasso, a world-famous Spanish artist. Among all his works, the Three Musicians impresses me most. He used simple shapes to create faces in the painting. It makes the painting quite unusual.
Picasso achieved his dream through hard work and great courage. He showed great talent as a kid and received strict art training. Later, he kept trying new painting styles, never afraid of challenging old art ideas even when others doubted him.
From Picasso and his works, I learn that creativity matters most. We should stick to our own ideas and be brave to try new things.
解析:
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:需写一篇100词左右的英文短文,围绕“最喜爱的画家”依次回答四个问题:①最爱的画家是谁?②最喜欢的作品及特点?③画家如何坚持并实现艺术梦想?④从画家及作品中学到什么?解题思路:先确定熟悉的画家(如毕加索),分三段写作:第一段介绍画家身份及代表作品、描述作品特点;第二段阐述画家坚持梦想的过程;第三段说明自身感悟,确保覆盖所有要点,词数符合要求,语言准确流畅。
【解析】
写作时,第一段点明最爱的画家是毕加索,介绍其为世界著名西班牙艺术家,引出最喜欢的作品《三个音乐家》,说明作品用简单形状创作、风格独特;第二段说明他通过努力、勇气,不断尝试新绘画风格,不惧他人质疑实现艺术梦想;第三段总结学到的道理:创造力重要,要坚持自我、勇于尝试,控制词数在100左右,语句通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
My favourite painter is Pablo Picasso, a world-famous Spanish artist. Among all his works, the Three Musicians impresses me most. He used simple shapes to create faces in the painting. It makes the painting quite unusual.
Picasso achieved his dream through hard work and great courage. He showed great talent as a kid and received strict art training. Later, he kept trying new painting styles, never afraid of challenging old art ideas even when others doubted him.
From Picasso and his works, I learn that creativity matters most. We should stick to our own ideas and be brave to try new things.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、英文写作要点覆盖
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有问题要点,结构清晰,语言流畅,用词准确,是符合要求的优秀范文,适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.7
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