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五、书面表达
假如你是李华,你校即将举办英文短剧写作大赛。请根据下列短剧梗概,写一篇100词左右的剧本参赛。剧本的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Background
Lily is a Grade 9 student, facing the coming high school entrance exam.
Plot
• Tired from study, Lily wants to relax with her smartphone but is stopped by her mum.
• After arguing with Mum, Lily runs out sadly.
• Dad stops Lily and talks with her patiently.
Act 1, Scene 1
Lily’s study
[Textbooks and exercise books pile up on Lily’s desk. Tired out, Lily puts down her pen and picks up her smartphone to relax. Then, Mum walks in suddenly.]










答案:Act 1, Scene 1
Lily's study
[Textbooks and exercise books pile up on Lily's desk. Tired out, Lily puts down her pen and picks up her smartphone to relax. Then, Mum walks in suddenly.]
Mum: Put down your smartphone! The high school entrance exam is around the corner! Why can't you just focus on your study?
Lily: I've studied hard for the whole afternoon. I just want a short break. You know, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
Mum: Everyone is working hard. If you relax even a little, you will fall behind.
Lily: All you care about is my grades! You never care about my feelings!
[Crying sadly, Lily runs out of the study. Dad quickly stops her.]
Dad: Sweetie, what's wrong?
Lily: Mum is so rude! She always pushes me too hard!
Dad: She loves you deeply. She just doesn't want you to regret in the future. Let's take a walk outside. After calming down, let's talk about it together.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英文短剧续写题,需承接给定的场景开头,紧扣剧情梗概:莉莉因备考疲惫想玩手机被妈妈阻止,争吵后跑出去,被爸爸拦住。续写时要贴合人物性格:妈妈的焦虑(重视中考)、莉莉的委屈疲惫、爸爸的耐心温和,对话需自然口语化,符合短剧的表达特点,控制字数在要求范围内。
【解析】
根据剧情逻辑及人物性格,续写如下:
Mum: Put down your smartphone! The high school entrance exam is around the corner! Why can't you just focus on your study?
Lily: I've studied hard for the whole afternoon. I just want a short break. You know, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
Mum: Everyone is working hard. If you relax even a little, you will fall behind.
Lily: All you care about is my grades! You never care about my feelings!
[Crying sadly, Lily runs out of the study. Dad quickly stops her.]
Dad: Sweetie, what's wrong?
Lily: Mum is so rude! She always pushes me too hard!
Dad: She loves you deeply. She just doesn't want you to regret in the future. Let's take a walk outside. After calming down, let's talk about it together.
【答案】
Mum: Put down your smartphone! The high school entrance exam is around the corner! Why can't you just focus on your study?
Lily: I've studied hard for the whole afternoon. I just want a short break. You know, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
Mum: Everyone is working hard. If you relax even a little, you will fall behind.
Lily: All you care about is my grades! You never care about my feelings!
[Crying sadly, Lily runs out of the study. Dad quickly stops her.]
Dad: Sweetie, what's wrong?
Lily: Mum is so rude! She always pushes me too hard!
Dad: She loves you deeply. She just doesn't want you to regret in the future. Let's take a walk outside. After calming down, let's talk about it together.
【知识点】
英语书面表达,短剧写作
【点评】
本题围绕学生备考的家庭场景展开,考查学生的英语对话写作能力,要求紧扣剧情逻辑,符合人物性格,语言简洁口语化,是初中英语常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
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